The Lady Down the Lane

in the first crevice of light
as dawn flushed its skies
her frail fingers struggled
to pluck weeds from spring buds
that laid like a colorful quilt
on her once rolling green lawn

you could hear the creaks on wood
as she rocked on the weathered porch
watching for the children to walk by
as the school days finally ended

she'd speak to anyone that listened
her story was hapless but known by all
her loneliness was seen in the depth of her hazel eyes
no one ever turned down the jaunty invite
inside her antiquated home
where her fingers danced nimbly
across the piano as she sang them songs

she hid her loneliness and darkness of life
reserved her tears behind closed blinds at night
when the blinds remained unopened the children knew
and they flooded the funeral homes to say their goodbyes

march 20, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Blodgett Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 12:05 PM
Plaintive, and austere yet so validating a description! Loved this alot. It reminded me of a neighbor I once knew and loved. Thank you for the beautiful read
Adams Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 6:32 PM
what a kind thing to say... thank you!
Kiser Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 9:57 PM
What a beautiful tribute to this soul. Well done.
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:38 PM
Thank you so much ML... hugs
Green Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Congrats on your placement in this contest my friend. Your poem was absolutely beautiful and I am not alone in thinking so, look at all of the people who have stopped by to read it. I am so proud of you
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:37 PM
Thank you so much Chris....your comment brought a smile... hugs
Hawkens Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your placement. Sandra, beautiful poem very emotional and touching. I can feel my heartstrings fluttering when I read this. Very moving.
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:37 PM
Thank you so much JC for such a kind comment... hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 10:01 PM
I am so happy to see this a top winner Sandra. People like her make a difference in this world. A beautiful difference. Congratulations! xxoo
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:36 PM
Thank you so much my sweet friend... hugs and blessings! XoXo
Faulkner Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, this is so moving and heartfelt-
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Thank you so much Michelle, she was a sweet person, and deserving of a nice tribute! hugs
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Back with congratulations on your awesome win.
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Thank you Eve... hugs
Callus Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 4:14 PM
So lovely and touching, Sandra! Congratulations on your merited podium finish! Regards // paul
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Thank you Paul... hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 4:02 PM
A great win. A wonderful story..........
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Thank you Paula... hugs
Watson Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 2:57 PM
You totally brought me into her world, Sandra. I have read many of your poems but this is one of my favourites.
Adams Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Thank you so much Wendy... hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:27 AM
I think the second read was even more impactful. You expressed this so well.
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thank you so much Rick... hugs and blessings...
Kiser Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 6:09 AM
Great imagery, I can see her rocking. Well done.
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:30 AM
thank you so much ML :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 8:23 AM
I think this is my favorite poem not only of today but of all time. I have read over two hundred poems this week and this one is the one I shall remember Sandra. Thank God you wrote it.
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:30 AM
wow... thank you so much Caren... I think we all know of someone like her... hugs and blessings :)
Horsman Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 1:43 AM
Wow, what an amazing poem this is, brings home to one 'life' as it is to someone somewhere..love the Hazel eyes reminds me of my mum.
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:29 AM
thank you so much Harry... glad I could make you think of your mom... hugs and blessings
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 12:27 AM
What a nice pleasant verse, if for the contest it should do very well. Enjoyed reading, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:27 AM
thank you so much Eve... hugs and blessings
Theraven Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 12:27 AM
Sandra, Well that is the way of it, cruel or kind. The watered and sheltered flower grows. The others survive or wilt in the mystery that a only merciful world knows. -Richard
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:28 AM
thank you Richard... she was a beautiful soul... hugs and blessings
Wolf Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Can just picture this fine lady. Perfectly portrayed! :) gw
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:27 AM
thank you so much Gershon... hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 7:13 PM
A worthwhile lady to know. The young and the old.
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:27 AM
thank you Kim... she was a sweetheart... hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Touching , moving, aching but beautiful poetry dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:26 AM
thank you so much Demetrios :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 5:53 AM
This is so moving Sandra. To give joy and be beloved by so many has its own reward. Beautiful, tho sad ending my friend, sad for the ones who will miss her! xxoo
Adams Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Connie... the little ones adored her... she was a sweetheart! hugs X0X0
Lamoureux Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 11:26 PM
A sad one eloquently expressed Sandra. Hugs Rick. Thanks for your visit. ;0)
Adams Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Rick... hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 9:33 PM
oh so sad and so poignantly written, Sandy. I love the way you phrase things even in story telling poetry.
Adams Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thank you so much Andrea... hugs
Cunningham Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 3:32 PM
A very touching story Sandra, we take so much for granted and so many suffer in silence but always manage to put on a smile for others. A lovely tribute to her but now she is at peace. Tom
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much Tom... she's been gone as long as my mother almost... hard to believe, but she still crosses my mind... hugs :)
Green Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Sadly beautiful my friend. What a heart touching piece. I am actually tearing up right now just thinking about this and reading your replies to others below about this woman who all of the children seemed to love. Wow, so beautiful as is the heat this poem came from.
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 2:58 PM
thank you Chris... shame she never had any children of her own, she was good with the kids and they all loved to hear her play the piano and sing to them...I was blessed to live next to her … she was always outside as if on a schedule... flowers first, then hanging laundry, then sitting on her rocker... a few times she fell asleep making lunch and her smoke alarms would go off but I would knock and wake her and all would be good...I don't remember who found her, but glad it wasn't me...hugs and blessings
Michael Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:51 PM
A sweet Lady was she...to conclude those graceful years as she did was a blessings...Nice write
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 2:54 PM
she was a sweetheart and the kids all loved her... they were sad when she passed and I wasn't going to take them to the funeral but they said they were going to her funeral as were all the neighborhood children so I went with them...it was only a block walk from the house... it was amazing to see the turnout, I think there may have been 3 older people that went to school or worked with her present but the rest were mostly young kids as little as 3... hugs
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