Paghunda Zahid Poet Rhyme

The Known-Unknown

I was a Moon in a dark abyss
Wandering alone in tormented solace
As aimlessly as a fish in a bowl
Glumly glad within my alien abode

In a spur ___ you appeared from Nowhere
A Blackhole pulling me towards its angelic snare
Rearranging the space time fabric ___
To a whole new realm ___ mystifying yet aesthetic 

And I couldn't resist, for that Benignity
set my heart ablaze___ filled its Valence shell
Entwined with you I will step in eternity soon
Hoping, your floral rugs bear stars and moons..!!

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Susan Ashley February 4, 2023 at 7:44 PM Dear Paghunda, it's a joy for me to return to this exquisite poem for another read. The depth of your rich imagery enchants my heart's imagination to no end. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan Paghunda Zahid November 15, 2023 at 10:28 AM Your remarks are very uplifting Susan... It means a lot. Thank you so much. Stay blessed!

Sam Kauffman February 1, 2023 at 10:39 AM Who could "resist" the beauty of the spell your words cast? "Floral rugs of moon and stars" indeed! Truly a reflection on entering a new world of beauty and peace. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Paghunda Zahid February 2, 2023 at 5:30 AM Thank you for sharing in the emotions of this poem with me and for sharing your valued thoughts so generously. I am humbled and honored by your kind words and felicitations.

Linda Alice Fowler February 1, 2023 at 8:13 AM Very romantic and sensual poem Paghunda. Congratulations on your win! :) Paghunda Zahid February 2, 2023 at 5:32 AM I am filled with gratitude to receive your precious thoughts and heartwarming congrats. Blessings

FJ Thomas December 19, 2022 at 4:39 PM You have a gift for painting pictures with your words. Enchanting Paghunda. Paghunda Zahid February 2, 2023 at 5:32 AM Your words are uplifting,and they are received with gratitude. Thank you!

Christuraj Alex March 13, 2022 at 5:25 AM The arrival is inevitable. Beautiful poem. Congratulations! Paghunda Zahid February 2, 2023 at 5:29 AM Thanks

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed January 12, 2022 at 10:12 AM Or is it the death, the passing over, you are talking about! Yes it might be! Thanks - Marshall

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed January 12, 2022 at 10:10 AM A blackhole snare but angelic! "In hope that your floral rugs have moon and stars " what a beautiful finish! completely submerged was I, in a surreal feeling! The poem fully satiated my reading soul! The lines gave me the feeling that she or the place is something dark, but the last line says, you finally accept it! A beautiful poem. Thanks - Marshall. Paghunda Zahid June 27, 2022 at 3:04 AM Thanks you

Anil Deo January 8, 2022 at 6:22 AM Over 300 readers! Though I read this poem before, it was rewarding to witness microcosm & macrocosm commune with time. Salaams, shalomShalOm Paghunda Zahid November 15, 2023 at 10:30 AM I am glad you enjoyed it.

Gershon Wolf December 11, 2021 at 9:04 PM May the 'Benignity' wend its way toward Infinity! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon Paghunda Zahid January 7, 2022 at 12:55 AM Ameen, summa'ameen.. Thank you

Gail Debole November 26, 2021 at 8:09 AM As soon as I read the line, "I was a moon in a dark abyss," I knew that I would be reading this poem to the end. Superb imagery and deep thoughts. Thank you for sharing with the world! Paghunda Zahid November 27, 2021 at 9:48 AM My pleasure Gail

Besma Riabi Dziri November 20, 2021 at 6:56 AM You ignite your reader's soul with your mystic and lighting poetry, Paghunda! You are a moon with a shining ink! An immense pleasure to join such an enchanting feel! My deepest regards and blessings. Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:31 AM My pleasure Dirzi.. Thank you for the appreciation. Blessings!

Joanna Daniel November 20, 2021 at 5:14 AM Enchanting write, Paghunda:) Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:32 AM Ethereal :)

Anil Deo November 19, 2021 at 10:25 PM You write as the great Ghazal poets, wow! Blessings, Salaam, Shalom shalom Shanthi Om. I have been made aware "she" may rearrange my space-time fabric. Thanx again P. Zahid. Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:29 AM Really? I did try writing a Ghazal on Silent One's request for his competition. But that was disastrous... Lol. Anyway, thank you for the kind reviews. I'm honoured.

Valsa George November 18, 2021 at 8:09 PM Your stepping into a new zone sounds so dreamy and enchanting ! May you enter into an ethereal realm, strewn with rubies and diamonds, stars and starlets.Enjoyed, Paghunda! Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:27 AM Ameen, ameen.. Summa'ameen :) Thank you Valsa!

Richard Lamoureux November 18, 2021 at 12:28 PM You had me at “Benignity” what a great word. I so enjoyed this piece. :0) Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:26 AM I am glad you enjoyed it.

John Gondolf November 18, 2021 at 9:11 AM What a beautiful poem, Paghunda, thanks for sharing it. John Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:25 AM My pleasure

Vijay Pandit November 18, 2021 at 7:16 AM Enjoyed your poem--your creative spirits shine! Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:26 AM Amin

Harry Horsman November 16, 2021 at 10:36 PM Oh wow, this is special poetry, an artist with a mind set of creativity. Paghunda Zahid November 18, 2021 at 6:29 AM Aw thanks Harry :)

Judy Ball November 10, 2021 at 7:41 AM Lovely Paghunda. So beautifully worded and well described. Loved it. God Bless, JB Paghunda Zahid November 15, 2021 at 7:21 AM Thanks JB

Jennifer Proxenos November 9, 2021 at 9:35 AM Paghunda my lovely friend,your poems just scream creative talent - this is outstanding work and as I have said once before, your work will be recognized far and wide, now and forever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paghunda Zahid November 15, 2021 at 7:21 AM Oh my goodness, Jennifer! You are too kind. Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2021 at 6:27 PM Beautiful! Paghunda Zahid November 15, 2023 at 10:29 AM Thanks

Susan Ashley November 7, 2021 at 5:41 PM Romantic brilliance spills from your poetic pen, Paghunda! Creative use of oxymorons illustrate the contrasting drama of the known/unknown with style and finesse.. Especially adore your last two lines! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Paghunda Zahid November 8, 2021 at 9:40 AM Your words are really uplifting Ashley. You are so thoughtful. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2021 at 8:56 AM this is SO poetic and it has very interesting contrasts in the pretty images. VEry nice!! Paghunda Zahid November 8, 2021 at 9:36 AM I really appreciate you taking the time to express that Andrea

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 7, 2021 at 8:26 AM A beautifully imagined verse, with mystery and romance. Paghunda Zahid November 8, 2021 at 9:34 AM Thanks Buehler

Mystic Rose Rose November 7, 2021 at 8:00 AM Ah, you are a poet through and through, I loved this verse, thank you for sharing it with me today :) Paghunda Zahid November 8, 2021 at 9:33 AM So kind of you... And welcome!

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