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The Kiss That Turned Into a Lie...

~By:Tirzah Conway~ The kiss that turned into a lie, And brought about a longing sigh, Took me to an endless high; Made me feel like I could fly, And brought about a longing sigh, Never daring to deny; Made me feel like I could fly, Together ‘til we say goodbye, Never daring to deny; Took me to an endless high, Together ‘til we say goodbye, The kiss that turned into a lie…
Inspired by the poem "He Kissed Me" By Constance~A Rambling Poet~ "I am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart" Contest

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Date: 10/2/2010 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tirzah in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "I am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart". It is an honor to be on the list with you. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2010 12:12:00 AM
Tirzah, this is such an interesting pantoum that I will have to read it several times over to get all the meanings implied. Great write, and congrats on your HM in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:11:00 PM
This is very interesting how you wove it all together, Tirzah. Very nicely done and congrats. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:37:00 PM
Well written pantoum. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Tirzah
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:38:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your HM in Constance's contest.. a wonderful piece from her original inspirational poem. enjoy your special honor tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:58:00 PM
excellent !
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:48:00 AM
Very impressive and creative write, Tirzah. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:03:00 PM
Good work Tirzah. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:38:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write on the kiss, ....Tirzah
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