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The Kindness In Your Eyes-2

Kindness in your eyes (revised) I've never seen anything so beautiful Anyone Anywhere so wonderful. It's taken me a while but, I finally realize that, the beauty that I see is the kindness in your eyes. Looks may be deceiving and beauty evanescent but, the kindness in your eyes is ever present. Your smile is mesmerizing with you there's no deception because, the kindness in your eyes is your love's reflection. John Derek Hamilton revised January15,2016

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Date: 8/29/2016 2:06:00 AM
Great write. Congratulations, Kai
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Kai.
Date: 8/28/2016 11:36:00 AM
John, just like Jo said, sweet and simple. So elegant and touching. Your love for your wife shines through like magic...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! (sorry for the late comment:)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Laura no worries, great contest thanks for sponsoring and my high placement, I'm honored.
Date: 8/28/2016 8:16:00 AM
Lovely dedication, John:) Congratulations on top win:) Sweet and simple:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Jo.
Date: 8/28/2016 7:31:00 AM
What a lovely romantic tribute for your wife John. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings, Connie 7 ; )
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Connie.
Date: 8/27/2016 4:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John. What a lovely tribute to your wife.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2016 4:13:00 PM
Thanks Agnes
Date: 7/7/2016 1:38:00 PM
I love this poem. What rhetorical devices did you use when writing it?
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/7/2016 5:49:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment. No intentional devices, used came from the heart.
Date: 1/15/2016 1:47:00 PM
excellent write John...lovely
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