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The Keyhole and the Key

As I am peeking though your keyhole I cannot believe what I see There are doctors and nurses All around me wanting to see me Why are you yelling and screaming I am trying the best that I can My arms are moving my feet are kicking Why don’t they deliver me I can see a bright light through the keyhole Who keeps pushing on me Finely my head is out and I can see Mommy and Daddy looking at me What did I do wrong Why is the doctor spanking me Now I see he want’s me to breath I now have a keyhole and key My new Mommy and Daddy, and Me Sponsored by: John Lawless Contest Name: SLAP THE MUSE AND TURN IT LOOSE Theme: PEEKING THROUGH THE KEYHOLE Date: 01/06/2019

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Date: 1/6/2019 9:50:00 PM
Great one, Bobby, and so unique! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Bobby May
Date: 1/6/2019 10:16:00 PM
Thank You Laura!!! Happy New Year and stay safe
Date: 1/6/2019 7:01:00 PM
what an original take on this contest. well done :)
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Bobby May
Date: 1/6/2019 10:17:00 PM
Thanks P.S. Happy New Year!!!
Date: 1/6/2019 7:43:00 AM
That's brilliant, Bobby. Superbly done.
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Bobby May
Date: 1/6/2019 8:16:00 AM
Well Thank you very much Line you are to kind my friend, Happy New Year and stay safe!

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