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The Keyhole

Just like her favorite character Alice she dresses up. Around her neck a key adorns.  On her way she goes. She has read of a keyhole that holds heaven on the other side of its door. A young girl named Cassy sits curiously by a riverbank. Twirling her long tresses as she peeks into reflecting waters, she fiddles with the key.  It falls into the river, and she jumps in after it.  Swimming for what seems forever, she lifts her head.  At first blurry swishes of gardens and trees are all she sees. The images clearer, around her stars of sterling silver.  The other side of the world is shimmering ever so bright!  Cassy in awe, hears the chirping of birds, then swims further searching on the river bottom. 
Waterdrops drip off her face as she takes a breath, back through the door, she clings to the key in her hand, the wren's singing their bird song.

Baptism took place
let go the crutch that holds back~
the child she flows
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Lawrence Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Wow, so very beautiful Ayana ! I love the nuance..the passage of time and the water renewal here. Captivating. Blessings, Susan :)
Anaya Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Glad you enjoyed Susan! It's quite a treat to here from such an accomplished poet and visual artist. ~Anaya ox
Tor Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Ayana you kept me glue to the words to find the ending of this Marvelous piece of Poetry. Wow! Thank you for your effort in writing and sharing such a lovely write. God bless you...
Anaya Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 12:24 PM
God bless you, Michael. I think I'm really getting the hang of it! ~Anaya ;)
Nicholsen Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 8:48 PM
beautiful piece enjoyed reading this
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 8:52 PM
Glad you enjoyed Yolanda!
Horsman Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:36 PM
Wow, love the haibun form, Anaya, and you truly create a deep and wonderful poem, here.
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Harry, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. It is a nice form, a first paragraph of your short story...
Foster Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 11:58 AM
On the other side... sometimes it is lovely. Sometimes it is unreal and just a dream. Great write. Well done. Ann
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 9:17 AM
A state of mind, perhaps? Ann, thank you kindly. Have a nice day!
Tor Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Nicely written Anaya...
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Michael
Kauffman Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Depth bathed in vivid experiential metaphor - a poem drawn in new perspectives, Anaya! Best wishes for the contest with this wildly unique haibun! Blessings.
Anaya Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Haibun a first for me! Hands on is how I work with unfamiliar forms, and it seems to work well. Most of my learning experience is impromptu. Thank you, Sam! Best
Buhagiar Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 1:39 AM
A great fable. Loved it.
Anaya Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 10:26 AM
I took a fable short I wrote and condensed it into this haibum form. Thank you, Voctor!
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