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The Key To Un- Loching

With a storm at night At Wuthering heights I see, that you approach You knew my heart Right from the start My hopes, thy would encroach They say with fear, You can't be here But my senses say, they're wrong And On this Loch, I'll stay and talk Till I see you swim along What is real and what is not I leave to those who are wise As I stay by the lake And talk to the fake That comes real in front of my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/28/2018 7:35:00 AM
If you ever get the chance go to the Yorkshire moors where the Bronte's lived and visit the parsonage. I'd love to see the key to unlock the conundrum you set as the loch's are many miles away from Yorkshire - but that is the beauty of poetic licence! Mine is in danger of being revoked!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2018 6:33:00 AM
Oh! What a delightful piece, Jerry. I love Wuthering Heights, though, it does freak me out at times. The brooding Heathcliff and those moors. You captured those feelings with this piece. Who is doing the swimming? Ness? ;)
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Date: 12/31/2017 6:11:00 PM
Very cool!
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