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The Junk Store

There is adventure, just waiting, as I open the door A tiny bell sings a tinkle, (old lyrics, perhaps) To a place of discovery... inviting me in... But offers in fact, enough excitement to thrill me I often drop by, one chance for a glance A dingy old store ..., this place I adore.. I scour the junk, the discarded old trunk, a bit of history in disguise Elbow to elbow, wall to wall...a sea of collectibles to capture my eyes Upon every visit, a brand new dilemma...how will I decide in the gloom? How can I use this? Should I buy that? Will I have room? Nothing like it in the world! Nothing so lovely, oh how I love this little shop! Will it be cheap?....Something lost in a heap?....It beckons me to stop! As the lifting down from the dusty shelves, the musty scent of wood Telling a story...pungent and sweet....restore it?....I could!! That antique rocker, perhaps it was lonely....so lost and cold Or those dusty dishes...on the shelf...I rub off the grime..the flowers are gold! Oh yes...I could give it new life....let it see sun, won't it be fun?! Buried beneath the rubbish.....where do I begin? A treasure, I'll think...Soon after the clink that nourishes a till For mere pennies...I will haul it home...paint, polish or shine...that's the thrill! How divine! Once it was theirs..., lost in a time zone...now it is mine... Swift on the track of the years that had left it behind....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/2/2010 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on a worthy presentation rhyme for second place glory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:01:00 PM
Hey Carrie take me along the next time you visit the store. Sounds amazing. Many congratulations for this super win.
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Date: 10/29/2010 9:55:00 PM
Carrie .... Many congrats for 2nd place with lovely poem in the contest. ....Luv/best wishes ....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/29/2010 3:55:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on this true winner!!!
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Date: 10/29/2010 1:42:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your success in my Passion Pit contest with this excellent entry complete with great dialogue .. appreciate your constant support luv..
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Date: 10/25/2010 8:15:00 AM
Hi Carrie, This one goes to my favs! It reminds me of what I've got in my flat! Too many collectibles and artefacta from many continents! Best of luck for the contest and thank you for your kind comments! Have a great week! ...Gert:)
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:12:00 PM
I love this poem and I love junk shops also, you captured the essence of "junk" well done from another "junk lover" best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 10/20/2010 11:36:00 AM
This one has all the senses, has everything. Being a victim of extreme nostalgia in my old age, I liked this muchissimo! Love, Daver
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Date: 10/20/2010 5:47:00 AM
sounds like fun!
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:16:00 PM
You have chosen a nice theme for the passion pit, carrie. good luc k
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading about the passion to go to flea markets or antique stores..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..I could just see and feel this place..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes the car crash did happen...I was three...It took my mother several weeks to recover...She had about 30 or 40 stitches in her knee...I still at times feel panicky when going over a bridge that is over water...Sara
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:37:00 PM
It would be fun to tour the consignment stores with you, Carrie. I get excited when I find treasures, too. But the last thing that passes my mind is, "Do I NEED it?" Dang it. Why did I have to be raised by such practical, frugal parents. So many gems left on the shelves when I answer, "No, I don't NEED it." Makes my blood boil. Love your poem, Carrie, and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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