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The Jouney tears snow melt run downhill stream to river see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 9:29:00 AM
This is great. The forms works very well with the subject. This brings me back to childhood in Jamaica when I used to place little objects in the stream then race to see where it would end up. Great job and thanks always for your wonderful comments.
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Date: 11/19/2008 11:10:00 PM
Lovely flow (pun intended) and great shape. Love this. Love, Nigel
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