The Jam Jar


A small shadow
has settled upon
the glass jam jar
on the desk, amongst 
a frozen swirl
of pencils
that are waiting patiently 
for inspiration
to seize a hand
and be picked up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 8:04 AM
It's rather ironic when we are seeking inspiration and we don't recognize it when it's there all along:) I like this simple poem, Paul.
Willason Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Thanks Daniel....true comment. A good example is when William Carlos Williams made a red wheelbarrow famous.
Lane Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 3:38 AM
I’m glad the hand that picked up a pencil Was yours, Paul. You turn mundane things into a work of art. Your imagery in this one is something I’d like to paint.
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 2:43 AM
...what lurks within that shadow.....
Willason Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 3:00 AM
There always has to be a shadow...required kit for any poet. Thanks for giving it your time John, valued.
Bell Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Strange thing, inspiration. I sometimes think you have to go out and hope a meteor falls on your head.
Willason Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 2:54 AM
Always illusive, pity there is no ritual for taming it. Thanks for commenting Paul.
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