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The Internet On a Sunday Evening

The Internet On a Sunday Evening Fall hollyhocks hug adobe walls; Sun streaks in purple mountain canyons, Stars as bright as chips of sun, Beckon me to my childhood home. Cottonwoods shedding on sidewalks; Winds blowing sands and tumble weeds; Though tall trees are now my lovers, I still long for and remember these. Playing in ravines at sunset; Painting faces and horses on rocks; Singing songs from nickel song sheets; Scuffing oxfords and bright white socks. Your eyes meeting my eyes in our morning pledge; Neath the flag before settling in class. I see on the internet you’re gone now. Oh, this Sunday evening will pass.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/8/2017 7:35:00 PM
Scuffing oxfords and bright white socks. Any that don't get a picture in your mind may not enjoy this as much as "older folks" :o) Danceland in the 50's. WOW Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming . oldbuck
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:33:00 AM
Oh the sadness within your amazing write is quite evident my friend! You have written a magnificent poem, one that is quite unique in its style, but similar at times too! I surely loved reading your heartfelt piece here this morning! Quite the remarkable poem, Great Work!!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/6/2017 10:29:00 AM
Yes, in nostalgic memories there is sadness. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 11/5/2017 5:14:00 AM
Well written, SW!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/6/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I may change the name, I don't think it fits to readers.
Date: 11/5/2017 4:04:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem Sunlite. So well written. It brings the reader there to see it and the reader can fell the motions too :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/6/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi! I love your comment.
Date: 11/4/2017 9:03:00 PM
Errrrr...WOW!! Loved all of it, Sunlite - great poetry! May I be permitted to inquire: does the last line refer to the passing away of a once former sweetheart? Truly though...a lovely little poem. My warmest regards, Sunlite. :) john
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/6/2017 10:33:00 AM
Yes, John, you're right on! Thank you for your commenting!

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