The Internal Dying of Benjamin Tippett

No Maria -
when a Bernstein motif lingers.
No rosary beads -
they'll simply slip 
through bourbon-stained fingers.
God carved the seven continents,
with skillful guise, 
and Puccini cries.
Adam's rib was imminent
when his chest burst splinters
into a scorned dodger's eyes.
No Turandot tonight, please -
Father willed him this disease;
a cancerous curse 
Ben's learned to despise.

No Rodgers -
when Oscar Hammerstein is dead.
No hammered halos -
they'll merely desecrate 
the madman’s head.
Ben abandoned rued religion,
with toxic breath - 
as Mimi wept.
Noah made a revision,
as the pairs filed two by two,
and into his mouth they crept.
No La Boheme, does he dote -
Mother’s cocktail glass 
cuts his throat.
A souvenir, 
from his childhood, 
he’s kept.

No Sondheim -
when one loathes another's company.
No steel wool ragcloths -
to dry the bloodshot eyes of thee.
He minded the duet’s jargon
endorsing the macabre, 
and Calaf sobbed.
Judas rethought the bargain,
knowing the silver pieces
wouldn’t save the soul he robbed.
A lost weekend sates Ben's day -
two severed hands on his chest,
he’ll lay; never feeling 
a heart 
that once throbbed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome poem. John! Agape, Moses
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March 1, 2010 at 6:07 AM
congrats on the win!!
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February 15, 2010 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations John, on your success in the “Tending The Sprouts” contest sponsored by: Catie Lindsey. It's easy to see why you placed 1st. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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February 13, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your first win, John in Caties's contest Tending The Sprouts. The internal dying of Benjamin Tippett is a reflection of many others like him, who are loveless and selfish and their lives end up in tragedy. This a magnificent poem written by a a very talented poet I admire the most. Enjoy your honor and recognition, John! Have a wonderful Valentine's Day and smile! Love, hugs and peace, Andrew.
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February 12, 2010 at 8:21 PM
A very strong verse, it was an honour to read. congratulations, well deserved...Margaret
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February 11, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations, John. Lots of "allusions" in this one!(I think that is what they call it!) LUv, Andrea
Kelly Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Another WOW from the gifted pen of Lord Heck of Brkln . Congrats ....
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February 10, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Exceptional write,John! My congratulations on your Ist Place win in the Sprouts contest! Great job ans usual! Peace, Audrey
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February 10, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Congratulations on first place!!!!!
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 3:19 PM
Oh yes.!!!!! Not surprising to see this as the winning poem...truly outstanding....I've said it before...no one writes as you can do!!:) Congratulations, John!!!
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February 10, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Congrats John on your winning first place in the Sprouts contest .. an amazing write for an amazing first place win... enjoy and enjoyed .... also thankxxx for your Love Heals and Hurts contest.. the poems u chose as winners were excellent.. though mine was not a winner thankxxx for the challenge of this contest u sponsored.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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February 10, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Terrific write, John! Congratulations on taking first place in Catie's contest. Much deserved. Love, Carolyn PS - hope you are continuing to do well following your surgery. You are in our prayers.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations Mr. John Heck on your well deserved 1st place win in Catie's Contest. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2009 at 9:28 AM
Congrats John on the double feature. Vince
Richards Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Another masterpiece from Mr. John Heck....so deserving to be among these outstanding featured poems!! Excellent!!
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June 1, 2009 at 12:33 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Ernilando
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May 3, 2009 at 2:18 PM
John, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 4, 2009 at 1:27 PM
Hello John, congrats on your two masterpieces surviving the first round...truly deserving to be in the finals, awesome! Cheers, Ernesto
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April 2, 2009 at 7:17 AM
John, Exceptional intellectual ability and originality is what I think when I read poetry by you. Congratulations my friend! Good luck in the finals and have a peaceful day filled with blessings. Caryl
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January 3, 2009 at 8:18 AM
I am so glad to see you featured!:) I agree ten times over with Stacey!!!:) You know I admire your work. Love, Sara:)
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December 30, 2008 at 5:28 PM
I certainly can't say it any better than Mark Cotterman did. I concur. So I shall just say: congratulations on having this poem featured, and I wish for you a super 2009. ~J~
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December 30, 2008 at 8:36 AM
Congratualtions, John, on your featured poem this week. Thanks for your support of my work. May you and your family have a blessed New Year, filled with joy and peace. All Best, Orma
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December 29, 2008 at 6:20 PM
Wow John, this is an amazing piece of true word art. Vivid, mysterious, and enthralling, it kept my attention from beginning to end. Congratulations on getting featured this week and God bless. :) Amy
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December 29, 2008 at 1:13 PM
John, I'm humbled by your mastery of this form, and by the brilliant thoughts that swirl from your head into beautiful, memorable pieces. Well done. Congrats to you for being featured! Respectfully, Donna.
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December 29, 2008 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations John on your beyond wonderful and completely amazing poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love & hugs, Shar
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