The Industrious Stitch

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
In a hollow on the council tip, where
Motionless it stands, in time rigid; still.
Fashions in one’s mind, grandma’s legacy
Of skill, stitched in a place named ‘Tunic Mill’
A long row of stone wall terrace houses,
Families of weavers, sewers of yarn
Alas, now bones that lay in the graveyard.
The war years seemed like only yesterday
The men over yonder, their spirits tall
With loved ones left behind to battle on,
Carve out a living, mend uniforms torn,
Holes where bullets have pierce and shrapnel ripped
Blood stains a regard, to what laid therein.
‘An ill-wind doused their flame, and the life of
The candle spluttered, spent, and all was dark.’

© Harry J Horsman  2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:38 PM
You take us back in time with this excellent poem, Harry. I have one such sewing machine which has a lot of sentimental value; if it could talk it would recount many a story! Regards // paul
George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:31 PM
What a story Harry. Heartbreaking! Many congrats on your win. Lainie
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:32 PM
a lovely take on the contest prompt Harry, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Wanted to congratulate you on your win, Harry! Hugs, Carolyn
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement. Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Well done, Harry. Congrats on your win.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Oh my. A brilliant take on this contest. A sure winner!! Reads smooth and effortlessly. Best one I've read... :)
Krutsinger Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 9:39 AM
I bow to the master; you have penned something that must have taken six muses and a faerie.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:45 PM
wow, Harry, this is a STRONG entry, maybe the best one I have seen. I fully expect to see it with a win. I want so much to do this one. Just can't get caught up here and do poems at the same time!!
Goff Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Expertly crafted, Harry....quickly fell deeply in this well written poem, thank you!
Rose  Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Many a tattered uniform was stitched with an old sewing machine I'm sure, back in those days, we saved everything . especially precious clothes, I have enjoyed your poem , thanks for sharing
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:53 AM
In the past, sewing machines were used more frequently, Harry. My grandmother was a seamstress too, and she gave me an old machine that allowed me to learn the trade. Made good use of it. The tattered uniforms of soldiers were repaired, rather than replaced back then. Sadly, the souls of both now rest in graveyards that receive few visitors. Beautiful, thought-provoking poetry, my friend. Love, carolyn
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April 27, 2018 at 8:10 AM
A significant incentive that left me in awe. Exceptional writing my friend. You painted this scene both artfully and emotionally.
George   Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Sure to top the winner's list, Harry.
Hagy Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:06 AM
So well crafted and with such profound sentiment for past years...I've never been good with a sewing machine, but I have hand-mended many a horse blanket!
Krampe Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Nice take on the contest prompt, Harry, I like your description with all these details.
Pandit Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Excellent depiction with great details that tell a cohesive story of days gone by..you have incorporated the three lines seamlessly..best for a win, Harry.
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Wow, Harry. A most charming poem. Beautifully penned.
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