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The Industrious Stitch

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust In a hollow on the council tip, where Motionless it stands, in time rigid; still. Fashions in one’s mind, grandma’s legacy Of skill, stitched in a place named ‘Tunic Mill’ A long row of stone wall terrace houses, Families of weavers, sewers of yarn Alas, now bones that lay in the graveyard. The war years seemed like only yesterday The men over yonder, their spirits tall With loved ones left behind to battle on, Carve out a living, mend uniforms torn, Holes where bullets have pierce and shrapnel ripped Blood stains a regard, to what laid therein. ‘An ill-wind doused their flame, and the life of The candle spluttered, spent, and all was dark.’ © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Date: 5/3/2018 1:38:00 PM
You take us back in time with this excellent poem, Harry. I have one such sewing machine which has a lot of sentimental value; if it could talk it would recount many a story! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:31:00 PM
What a story Harry. Heartbreaking! Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:32:00 PM
a lovely take on the contest prompt Harry, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:16:00 PM
Wanted to congratulate you on your win, Harry! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:20:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement. Well done!
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:16:00 AM
Well done, Harry. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:25:00 PM
Oh my. A brilliant take on this contest. A sure winner!! Reads smooth and effortlessly. Best one I've read... :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 9:39:00 AM
I bow to the master; you have penned something that must have taken six muses and a faerie.
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Date: 4/27/2018 8:45:00 PM
wow, Harry, this is a STRONG entry, maybe the best one I have seen. I fully expect to see it with a win. I want so much to do this one. Just can't get caught up here and do poems at the same time!!
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Date: 4/27/2018 8:04:00 PM
Expertly crafted, Harry....quickly fell deeply in this well written poem, thank you!
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Date: 4/27/2018 4:27:00 PM
Many a tattered uniform was stitched with an old sewing machine I'm sure, back in those days, we saved everything . especially precious clothes, I have enjoyed your poem , thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:53:00 AM
In the past, sewing machines were used more frequently, Harry. My grandmother was a seamstress too, and she gave me an old machine that allowed me to learn the trade. Made good use of it. The tattered uniforms of soldiers were repaired, rather than replaced back then. Sadly, the souls of both now rest in graveyards that receive few visitors. Beautiful, thought-provoking poetry, my friend. Love, carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2018 8:10:00 AM
A significant incentive that left me in awe. Exceptional writing my friend. You painted this scene both artfully and emotionally.
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Date: 4/26/2018 10:01:00 AM
Sure to top the winner's list, Harry.
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:06:00 AM
So well crafted and with such profound sentiment for past years...I've never been good with a sewing machine, but I have hand-mended many a horse blanket!
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:25:00 AM
Nice take on the contest prompt, Harry, I like your description with all these details.
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Date: 4/26/2018 6:17:00 AM
Excellent depiction with great details that tell a cohesive story of days gone by..you have incorporated the three lines seamlessly..best for a win, Harry.
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:56:00 PM
Wow, Harry. A most charming poem. Beautifully penned.
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