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The Impact of Opening a Window

outside tumbles in through an opened window ~ birdsong and breeziness

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Lin Lane

Date: 9/26/2023 2:03:00 AM

I enjoy opening my window before sunrise each morning to hear those sounds tumbling in to me. No horns or human voices.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/26/2023 7:43:00 AM

It was uplifting to do this morning x

Silent One

Date: 9/26/2023 1:27:00 AM

Lucky you getting those birds still, maybe I need to get up earlier... I seem to be awaking to silence... or maybe i should open the window lol... Or maybe the birds in my garden are silent just like my pen name.. raining heavily this morning.. hope it is better over there..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/26/2023 5:29:00 AM

I have run 5 - (there was drama around 1st one) show don't tell, tell don't show - two versions of same haiku, ekphrasis on Munch, Van Gogh Monoku, short - 4 word meaningful poem and teach me a lesson - rewrite my draft free verse poem....

Silent One
Date: 9/26/2023 2:10:00 AM

You may have a point there, it is pretty new double glazing.. I think you solved the mystery.. I have written about windows and probably done a prompt in the past.. maybe on Insta.. Have you thought about doing a contest?

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/26/2023 1:58:00 AM

Ahh no rain, plenty of birds - you've probably got exquisite double glazing - a poetic prompt I bet you've not used yet :)