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The I, In Me

Inside is a secret enchanted map, where this life I recap; sometimes, I am lost and swirling at sea, from my mind's chatterbox I flee; deep inside is a goblin guide. Goblin takes me to the past in a snap, to a hideous trap; oh, freedom from this fear, despair, I plea, from weeping I want to be free; and I am flung into the tide. In valleys of sorrow- sadness I wrap, for peace from self, I clap; don't dwell too long in the past is the key, I say to the I, who is me; from the goblin I want to hide. In a wild storm my wings flutter and flap, where joy and sad overlap; oh, why can my inside not be filled with glee, and be strong like a mighty tree; so confused that my thoughts collide. I want a magic wand that I can tap, and inside voices slap; I pray, pray but there is no guarantee, yes I call out to the great he; oh, was that his voice that just sighed, __________________________ November 23, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/The I, in Me Copyright Protected, ID 18-1087-297-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Written for the contest, The I Of The Storm sponsor, Maureen McGreavy Tenth Place

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Date: 12/12/2018 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Line for the congrats and Gregory for the great comment and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:14:00 AM
Enjoyed this very much, and I can so relate - Best wishes and sincere congratulations for your win in Maureen's contest, Constance - keep up the great work, and I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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Constance La France
Date: 12/12/2018 4:28:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2018 11:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:27:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2018 8:40:00 AM
Michael, thank you so much for visiting my poem with congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/24/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Chris, Sand, Jack, Ian, and Phillip for visiting my poem with your great comments , appreciate. The feel of my poem is indeed sadness, and fear of visits from that chatterbox goblin who dwells inside of me, and yes, the I, eye sees all within there is no hiding, yes my poem is deep and gets deeper and deeper each time you fall into it. even for me.
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Date: 11/23/2018 9:45:00 PM
First I want to congratulate you on bringing a little '90s style bling bling with the picture you posted. Word up for that. Second, I want to tell you I read your poem 5 times and felt it reach a little deeper inside me each time. It's that strong. Great write, as usual.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2018 8:38:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2018 3:23:00 PM
An amazing poem! Well written!!
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Date: 12/10/2018 8:38:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2018 3:15:00 PM
love this powerful write, my friend - love to you & Snuggles x
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Date: 12/10/2018 8:38:00 AM
Love ~
Date: 11/23/2018 1:46:00 PM
the 'i' is the 'eye'...it determines how and what we see...though it be biased toward our genetics...sense of depth is a true eye; "i" on the unknown
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Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2018 8:39:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2018 1:29:00 PM
There is a deep sadness in this wonderfully written poem that I can feel as it washes over me. I think we all have these goblins that have a goal of disrupting our lives, at least I know I do and it is not a pleasant experience and unfortunately, I don't think mine will leave anytime soon. But...you never know, if I get to continue reading wonderful poetry likes your Dear Heart, there is no telling the smiles I might find.
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Date: 12/10/2018 8:39:00 AM
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