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The Hummingbird

Trudging home in mist rain, the streets are colorless, a reflection of the clouds that sit on rooftops. The rain seeps through my clothes and leaves me just as cold and damp on the outside as i feel. Through rain mottled lenses i catch the barest glimpse of it flashing into sight and then gone. I turn and there it is again, a glittering jewel cast upon a sky of grey. A hummingbird, in the heart of winter. I stare in awe, at the tiny thing made of emeralds and rubies, it hovers in the air, still for a moment, even the rain seemed to hold its breath. The spell breaks and the little bird with its chest aflame and wings made of shattered light is gone. Leaving me standing, dumbfounded on the side of the road in the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/4/2016 10:57:00 PM
Hi Jac, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:25:00 PM
Well described moment,, they are like an opal and reflect sunlight.
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:13:00 PM
Jac, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT,
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