The Human Experience Since 1914

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For 10 word challenge contest.

Ten word challenge 
Words to be used:

1.Halcyon
2.Opulent
3.Jealousy
4.Visceral
5.Exuberant
6.Sonorous
7.Penumbra
8.Desultory
9.Cynical
10.Crepuscular

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                   HALCYON days of long ago, when OPULENT ones lived
                     without fear of JEALOUSY as all were richly satisfied
           EXUBERANT joy was felt as all expected an even brighter future,
                where everyone would enjoy abundant peace and security
     Then suddenly, a SONOROUS chorus of evil nationalism swept the globe
     as 1914 closed with VISCERAL feelings of fear mixed with national pride
       Only a PENUMBRA of hope was left as CREPUSCULAR days of evil war
                      eclipsed any hope of lasting peace for humankind
            Since then the human experience has been at best DESULTORY
            leading to the CYNICAL feelings of disbelief that exist until today.





John Derek Hamilton
January 29,2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/12/2016 8:48:00 AM
Anytime
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Date: 2/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 2/3/2016 12:33:00 PM
impressive all the way, john... many cheers on your win!..huggs
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Nette.
Date: 2/2/2016 10:42:00 PM
John, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 2/2/2016 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this win! Interesting.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thanks Susan
Date: 2/2/2016 10:07:00 AM
You told it exactly the way it is and why, John, congratulations.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Lin
Date: 2/2/2016 8:54:00 AM
John, nice write in story form.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks James was a tough one!
Date: 2/1/2016 5:52:00 PM
Love the historical theme you chose to use these difficult words, John. Well done! Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Sandra congrats to you also well done!
Date: 2/1/2016 5:02:00 PM
Congrats on your placement John *smiles* :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 5:55:00 AM
Thanks congrats to you too!
Date: 1/30/2016 3:07:00 PM
Well done, John. Some very challenging words with an excellent message. A7, but I'm not the judge.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Daniel congrats to you also!
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