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The Human Experience Since 1914

Ten word challenge Words to be used: 1.Halcyon 2.Opulent 3.Jealousy 4.Visceral 5.Exuberant 6.Sonorous 7.Penumbra 8.Desultory 9.Cynical 10.Crepuscular 10 Lines only HALCYON days of long ago, when OPULENT ones lived without fear of JEALOUSY as all were richly satisfied EXUBERANT joy was felt as all expected an even brighter future, where everyone would enjoy abundant peace and security Then suddenly, a SONOROUS chorus of evil nationalism swept the globe as 1914 closed with VISCERAL feelings of fear mixed with national pride Only a PENUMBRA of hope was left as CREPUSCULAR days of evil war eclipsed any hope of lasting peace for humankind Since then the human experience has been at best DESULTORY leading to the CYNICAL feelings of disbelief that exist until today. John Derek Hamilton January 29,2016

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Date: 2/12/2016 8:48:00 AM
Anytime
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Date: 2/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/12/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 2/3/2016 12:33:00 PM
impressive all the way, john... many cheers on your win!..huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Nette.
Date: 2/2/2016 10:42:00 PM
John, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/12/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 2/2/2016 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this win! Interesting.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thanks Susan
Date: 2/2/2016 10:07:00 AM
You told it exactly the way it is and why, John, congratulations.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Lin
Date: 2/2/2016 8:54:00 AM
John, nice write in story form.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks James was a tough one!
Date: 2/1/2016 5:52:00 PM
Love the historical theme you chose to use these difficult words, John. Well done! Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Sandra congrats to you also well done!
Date: 2/1/2016 5:02:00 PM
Congrats on your placement John *smiles* :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 5:55:00 AM
Thanks congrats to you too!
Date: 1/30/2016 3:07:00 PM
Well done, John. Some very challenging words with an excellent message. A7, but I'm not the judge.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Daniel congrats to you also!

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