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The Hourglass

Life begins - start the timer Watch as each grain of sand falls to the bottom Each one is a passing moment in time A special memory, maybe even every breath... You watch each moment in time pass And then you realize - The hourglass is half finished. The clock continues to tick Tick, tock, tick What is it you have accomplished while each grain fell to the bottom? Now you reminisce, think back to memories But while you're thinking back, More sand falls to the bottom You begin to panic - there's not much time left But then you realize everything that happened should be cherished Just like every moment, maybe even every breath... The last grain of sand just fell. It cannot be turned upside down - You only get one hourglass - one chance to live Each grain of sand should be cherished, and never wasted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/16/2016 2:20:00 PM
Ashley, , nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/21/2011 1:26:00 PM
THAT WAS VERY GOOD READ THANKYOU AND WITH SUCH A GOOD UNDERSTANDING AND GOOD PRESENTAION OF THOUGHT THANKYOU AGAIN
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:26:00 AM
tru dat sister ashley lets cherish it all b4 we die and rot p.d.
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:07:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Ashley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2011 12:20:00 AM
I knew a young girl named Ashley Harris in Dayton 15 yrs ago......This is such a dynamic illustration of the brevity of life and the opportunities not taken. Must enjoyed. /tick tock tick tock...great!
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Date: 10/20/2011 11:43:00 PM
My thoughts exactly. I like the visual of the hourglass. I can see my moments in the poem wen it repeats " cherish every breath"-Jess
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