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The Hourglass

He loved me before I broke. Back when he could hold me and my shattered pieces would remain whole, instead of slipping through his fingers like weightless sand. He loved me. But his hands were the orifice of the hourglass, and when the last grain of my sanity fell to his feet, he knew— our time was up.

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Date: 5/17/2025 6:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/14/2025 11:59:00 AM
So much for "in sickness and in health, til death do us part." More fish...
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