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The Horrible Breakup

I feel the end coming She has spent her last second with me She doesn’t want us to be together The end is in sight I have cried many days Knowing this was coming I hurt so very much And I know it’s sad She doesn’t approach the ending well It’s just a straightforward painful breakup She leaves no hatred behind And it’s all out and destructive I fall apart at her words I beg her to stay She immediately dismisses this request And practically yells at me Her tone is awful It’s so condescending I can’t stand another moment I burst into a flood of tears I wish she would stop Stop her tirade of hatred towards me Where was our love we had Did I mean anything to her Was I someone of importance Someone she cared for When she calms down She simply states, “It’s all over, goodbye” And there it was The end Russell Sivey

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Mourning Mist

Date: 7/31/2011 11:33:00 PM

do you know how much it hurts to be called a witch? when I was what delivered..helped to deliver you to belief..but you hit like on pussy cat like i am nothing but trash, that my feelings mean nothing? you are in denial over the lack of spine to do what is honorable and done in valor..I do not regret my postings tonight..if you must throw me out again, then go ahead, i am used to being garbage and a witch over the lantern

Mourning Mist

Date: 7/31/2011 11:30:00 PM

comparisons to a witch, postings coming through with links to my site...someone sits and watches, remaining still, no spine..and in denial...compared to a witch? have you no thoughts to others feelings here? but likes still flow..like she is garbage?

Mourning Mist

Date: 7/31/2011 11:27:00 PM

i recall a posting, a haiku..of keeping people around because condescending makes the place alive..no it does not, not at all..witch burnings..i don;t think so..denial..

Mourning Mist

Date: 7/31/2011 11:24:00 PM

condescending or only pointing out true facts of the others issues? are you really being honest to yourself here? i think someone is in big denial, BIG

Mourning Mist

Date: 7/31/2011 11:22:00 PM

sorry to hear about your luck, did you love her like a real man? not being rude, but did you do all her heart asked you too? maybe someone else will come along that might be more satisfied with what you were offering? possibly even two?