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The Hints of Fall

I can hear the wind making snowballs fading leaves crisping chattering acorn crazed squirrels a soft rustle of chilled bird feathers I can see low hanging branches offerings to short nibblers the beginning blush of a Red Maple the edge of the day creeping closer I can feel the excitement of distant V’s chittering sparrows at sunrise scampering squirrels school bus arrivals the hints of fall gently claiming its season John G. Lawless ©9/30/2022

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Date: 9/2/2022 6:17:00 PM
Uniquely descriptive and sweet John!
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Date: 8/30/2022 10:34:00 AM
"The wind making snowballs" indeed John. What a wonderful blend of the senses in a seriously sensory transition from summer to autumn's glory! Enjoyed this very creative, gentle, quest into autumn on waves of colors, birds, squirrels and leaves!
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Date: 8/30/2022 8:24:00 AM
lovely! I esp. like the second stanza :)
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