The Hints of Fall

I can hear
the wind making snowballs
fading leaves crisping
chattering acorn crazed squirrels
a soft rustle of chilled bird feathers

I can see
low hanging branches
offerings to short nibblers
the beginning blush of a Red Maple
the edge of the day creeping closer

I can feel
the excitement
of distant V’s
chittering sparrows at sunrise
scampering squirrels
school bus arrivals

the hints of fall
gently claiming its season

John G. Lawless
©9/30/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Anaya Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Uniquely descriptive and sweet John!
Kauffman Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 10:34 AM
"The wind making snowballs" indeed John. What a wonderful blend of the senses in a seriously sensory transition from summer to autumn's glory! Enjoyed this very creative, gentle, quest into autumn on waves of colors, birds, squirrels and leaves!
Woodrow Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 8:24 AM
lovely! I esp. like the second stanza :)
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