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The Hidden Springs

Come, we shall walk The windy paths To the springs. How long now Have we been wandering In this desert? My jug will shatter (Or am I the vessel?) If we do not soon find The hidden promised waters. But we lost our way Back, to bring tidings of the springs To those in the dry lands. We walk in the desert And shall drown In the abundance we found – Will nobody come to help us drink? August 28, 2016 For contest POETRY UNHINGED Sponsored by John lawless

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Date: 7/17/2018 4:03:00 PM
What a horrible feeling -your poem reminds me of the powerful scene in the movie 'The English Patient' where the hero has gone mad from traveling the desert and cannot return to his beloved in time to save her. Well penned, Agnes.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/20/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comments, Line.

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