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The Heel Grabber

The heel grabber
from birth, until deception called out.
Jacob loved to dish out
soup, thick with red gravy.

His twin jealous for
that heavy satisfying sup
but fate would betray him
as would his belly ach(ing).

Esau, translated
would be “Harry,” changed
from hairy and was he red
or the living end…do I digress…

Jacob held on for dear life,
as he like many second born,
wanted to be first. And his dear mama,
bless her heart, heard from God -

Rebecca wondered what the wrestling 
in her womb was all about.
She thought, ‘must be boys.’
She thanks God for the dynamic duo

but knows that God has chosen
numero two. She favors Jacob
as her husband clings to his firstborn,
Esau, that macho hunter.

Jacob is a mama’s boy
but would have to flee
after deceitfully gaining
his brother’s birthright.

Of course Esau sold it
precariously for a bowl
of stew and their blind dad
would be tricked too.

Jacob ran from his land
as his brother wanted to Cain him,
in other words murder was on his mind.
Uncle Laban took him in.

Back in that time
cousins would marry
and Jacob fell head over heels
for the beautiful Rachel.

In the dark, they made love
to consummate their marriage
after working seven years
for her dear old dad…

except Laban slipped his firstborn
under those covers,
and the heel grabber
would have to work seven more

so he could have the object
of his affection. (Slighted Leah
was given many more children
as God saw her plight.)

After all those deceitful years,
returning to his rightful place,
he wrestled an angel of God.
He wouldn’t let go until God blessed him —

that heel grabber had tightened his grip,
until he was blessed and unhinged his hip.
As the angel touched Jacob’s socket
and changed his name to Israel.

3/15/2022

Genesis 25:19 - 32:32
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 3/17/2022 5:24:00 AM
Interesting write, Kim. Well done! Yep, and we, as a society, are still jealous and deceitful. Someday God will be bored with it all...and curtains!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2022 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 3/16/2022 8:09:00 PM
An interesting, entertaining read, Kim. ~ gw (Soup mail please).
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2022 5:27:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/16/2022 9:38:00 AM
Well done You gave us part of the Genesis It is appreciated. Hugs. Victor
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 1:28:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed! ~ hugs!
Date: 3/16/2022 5:38:00 AM
OOOOWWWWWEEEEE!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 1:29:00 PM
LOL…thank for hanging in with this long write!
Date: 3/15/2022 3:58:00 PM
Kim, you did a wonderful job explaining the story of Jacob and Esau. Well written, Blessings ~ Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 6:53:00 PM
Thank you! Blessings ~ Kim
Date: 3/15/2022 2:02:00 PM
So much good material to work with in Genesis (and Exodus). Nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jeff!
Date: 3/15/2022 12:01:00 PM
I always loved it that the first murderer in the Bible started with the same letter as my name. "Jacob ran from his land as his brother wanted to Cain him," So that resonated with me. Nicely penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 12:40:00 PM
Our Pastor was talking about these twins in his last two sermons. Kim likewise like Caren and Cain. I think of Caren as car-ing! Love ya, poetry sis!
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