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The Heavens Sigh Snow

THE HEAVENS SIGH SNOW


F r e e z i n g   falling  gems
from  good  heavens  sigh,
smooth-clear and shining
coating all the world:
a canvass of white.

Persons    s e e i n g,
snowman trees line
sugar shade lake,
do skylark glee...

Skates   and   skis,
snowball   fights,
fireplace nights.

W~i~n~t~e~r
dreaming

fires!
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~Sponsor	Broken Wings
Contest Name	Trashed #4~

__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
8:25 pm, November 11, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Scott Williams Date: 12/8/2015 10:34:00 PM Just reading this makes me shiver. Very well done. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/8/2015 12:56:00 PM Olive, Congratulations, SKAT Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/8/2015 11:53:00 AM Olive, congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 12/8/2015 5:21:00 AM Great write and win, Olive.. I need to try this form. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 12/8/2015 4:00:00 AM The form, picture and words are beautiful! Congrats for your placement, Olive! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/20/2015 3:59:00 PM The shape's delightful little one, and the imagery reminds me of Scotland in the snow of which you'll witness soon. Snowball fights aplenty :P ~~ love it // hugs James xxxx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/19/2015 4:00:00 PM Olive, to answer the question you asked below.The only other form I can think of is all at the left margin.But with this form you chose, I believe it's preferred to do it exactly as you did it! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/17/2015 2:00:00 PM Ahh!! Great Diminished Hexaverse..Hot Chocolate and popcorn create a winter retreat..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 11/17/2015 9:06:00 AM Love the poem Olive. Some really good lines. Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/17/2015 6:37:00 AM Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/30/2015 2:15:00 AM thanks much Ravi... =`)

Tim Ryerson Date: 11/17/2015 6:13:00 AM What a title! For one who has never seen snow, this is exquisitely worded and although you posted pictures, there was no need because you painted the scene to perfection...God bless you dear lady - Tim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/30/2015 2:13:00 AM thanks much Tim you always boost my confidence... =`)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/16/2015 9:04:00 PM A lovely, winter scene, Olive, and I love the form! Like you, I grew up in a tropical climate so I have to use my imagination, too. Big hugs and thanks again for your visit, Rhonda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/20/2015 8:37:00 PM Thanks so much Rhonda, I appreciate your kindness.. =`) hugs too and thanks!!!

Vera Duggan Date: 11/16/2015 6:29:00 PM Hi Olive, nice poem, we don't get snow in this part of Oz but I experienced it while I was in UK and loved it, you have described snow very well in this piece, hope you are well, take care......Vera Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/19/2015 4:39:00 AM Thank you so much Vera am so pleased with your comment here.. =`) I am well thank you.. =`)~Olive Eloisa

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/16/2015 6:11:00 PM It's not only nice to read but it has such a cute form! Like an upside down pine tree in the snow!! I really like this. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 7:00:00 PM Andie, I love how you see a poem... =`) I'm somewhat puzzled what form shall I do to make it different in the presentation using a form... so happy you observe the look of a pine tree.. =`) weeee~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus Date: 11/16/2015 5:36:00 PM Very lovely, Olive_eloi! Your imagery dresses this winter poem in a white landscape. Like you, I never experience snow except when I went on top of mountains, abroad. In Malta it never snows! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/17/2015 6:21:00 AM Aha so you also do hiking Paul, how well rounded you are.. =`) thanks so much for this generous comment. =`) hugs!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Tim Smith Date: 11/16/2015 3:44:00 PM Nothing better than a roaring fire on a wintry night sipping hot chocolate. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/17/2015 6:19:00 AM I agree to your choice Tim, =`) though i never experienced snow and sometimes during December to February it gets cold here i prefer hot chocolate.. =`)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/16/2015 10:45:00 AM Glorious to view but not fun to shovel for sure. This is lovely Olive! Cool form too! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/17/2015 1:39:00 AM I agree with you Connie, we have some relatives in Alaska and then at New Zealand and they sometimes share their difficulty when snow gets too harsh... thank you//=`)

Kim Shaw Date: 11/16/2015 10:26:00 AM The perfect genre for this exceptional poem, Olive. I so enjoyed the imagery. Hugs, Kim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/16/2015 7:16:00 PM Thanks much Kim.. =`) nice to see you on my page again.. =`)~O.E.