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Dawn pierces the heart of night, with lances of fiery light. And where clouds bleed scarlet blood, trickles morph into a flood. Shadows emerge from the dark behind every tree and stone. And fleeing a night layed stark, shift into shapes of their own. Songbirds serenade the sun, a brand new day has begun. And it's welcomed with a song; while hummingbirds hum along. Sunbeams saturate the scene, where ebony shadows green. And color spills from the light, inking everything in sight.

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Date: 2/6/2023 11:40:00 AM
Way to go in Brian's contest. Your name is on the list of winners'. Wave the banner high. Thanks for sharing this work. Sara
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Date: 2/6/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thanks, Sara, your comments are always welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/6/2023 7:41:00 AM
Lovely photo enhanced by your gorgeous words Emile. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/6/2023 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2018 8:55:00 AM
This was really good. Excellent use of your words.
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Date: 7/26/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Mike, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/5/2018 10:57:00 AM
An artist eye sees the imagery in nature,Emile, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I always appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2018 12:39:00 AM
This is absolutely a beautiful well-written poem! Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2018 9:22:00 PM
Back with congrats on your top win, Emile.
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2018 8:53:00 PM
The second stanza is truly special !! This whole poem is a painting to behold! Congratulations, Emile !
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Carrie, your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2018 8:24:00 PM
I love the concept of this poem, Emile. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:)
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2018 7:37:00 PM
"Scarlet skies pierced by fiery sun"..Congrats on your win Emile
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/29/2018 10:27:00 PM
I love this, Emile: the personification, the rhymes, the colorful picture it paints in my mind. Very short and very sweet.
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Date: 5/29/2018 10:25:00 PM
Lovely, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/30/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.

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