The Hawk


The hawk circled, watching below
at all the activity happening
He focused on each person, as he would prey
But, instead he was just observing, listening, learning
He went to the wise owl and reported his observations and instincts
As he flew across the landscape, he could see things far and close 
He could see the present and the past
A span of time that connected things like a familiar path
A path flown many times!
The wise owl said, you are right, your vision is clear
You will reach a destination where everything makes sense
Stop circling; Fly with freedom and you will discover your new path
The others below will never anticipate this!
For they were not here for so many years
They do not know who you have become
They will never reach you no matter what they do
For they lack the critical knowledge and they are the ones who are stuck!

Heidi Sands

6/10/24

Received Poem of the Day June 12,  2024.

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M  Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 2:51 AM
What a team the Hawk and Owl make! A beautiful poem full of great meaning….inspirational just like you Heidi! It makes me happy to see your name up here….you are so deserving of it!! Congratulations on POTD sweet Heidi! Debx
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June 27, 2024 at 5:25 AM
Thank you for being so kind. Your comment brings s smile :) I hope you have a nice day :)
Fowler Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Fly high dear Heidi! Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
Sands Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Linda. :)
Gentile Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 5:28 AM
I am so happy to see that you were honored with POTD for this soaring piece Heidi! I can't overstate the accolades below ! Lessons to be learned and I hope that it is not too late! Congratulations and Happy Saturday xxoo
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Thank you very much Mike! Happy Saturday . Xoxo: :)
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 8:15 AM
Belated congrats on POTD for this outstanding work, Heidi. Happy Friday, Gershon
Sands Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Thank you Gershon! Happy Friday :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:03 AM
Back with belated congratulations to you Heidi on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 4:04 AM
Thank you Tom. Have a great day :)
Nicole Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:16 PM
Dear Heidi, your last line says it all. ' For they lack the critical knowledge and they are the ones who are stuck. ' Sad that many in the world can relate to this. Animals are very smart, indeed. Your thoughts are powerful. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Brandy. Animals are smart. I appreciate your kind comment! I hope all is well. Hugs :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you. love, Gina
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Thank you Gina. Blessings :)
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June 12, 2024 at 9:32 AM
O for the hawk eyes of a wise owl, we’d never miss a trick. A lovely Free Verse Heidi, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:54 PM
Exactly. Thank you Beryl :)
Manassian Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Congrats of poem is the day, dear. We have much to learn from the wise owl. :)
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:54 PM
Yes, we have much to learn from the wise owl! Thank you :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "The Hawk" is a wonderful story/write. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs.... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.................
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Hi Paula. Thank you very much :)
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 7:37 AM
What a way to see the flight of a hawk, Heidi. I love to watch them just sit and stare. Their stare so focuses, and I wonder on what. on a prey or just the passer Byers not afraid of anything. Congratulations on POTD, I enjoyed reading
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 7:53 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)
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June 12, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations, Dear Heidi, for the honour. Excellent inspirational poem penned by a master storyteller. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 7:53 AM
Thank you fir your kind comment :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Great Poem!! Hawk and the way to go! Good values! inspirational!
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Thank you very much :)
May Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Heidi, Dropping back with Congrats on POTD
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:11 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Rodgers Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 4:13 AM
Dear Heidi! I am back to say yes I loved your deep poem on the hawk's journey. Scoring POTD too! You're soaring high, keep inspiring us with your beautiful words! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Thank you very much :)
Meadows Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 3:26 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well written!
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Thank you :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 3:22 AM
Heidi, a wonderful poem and message, congratulations on POTD!
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Thank you very much :)
Seeker Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 2:14 AM
Be the hawk! Deep musings here, Heidi, enjoyed. Warmest congratulations on POTD
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Thank you ! :)
Jones Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 1:39 AM
You are a great storyteller! Enjoyed your work and congratulations on potd Heidi!
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Thank you very much ! :)
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June 12, 2024 at 12:42 AM
Wisdom flows through your words from the beginning until the end of this magnificient piece!. Many Congratulations on the POTD, Heidi. It's very well deserved. I enjoyed it so much. Well done. Have a wonderful awarded day!.
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Thank you very much :)
Wolf Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 7:47 PM
This is AMAZING! What imagination and creativity you have! Like a tale from an enchanted forest. Hurrah, Heidi! ~ Spellbound
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much Gershon! I am happy to see your feedback. I hope all is well :)
Kauffman Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:46 AM
What a wonderful mystical fable, Heidi. The metaphors are so clear and vibrant inviting us to experience the wisdom of your words. Thank you for this poem. Blessings and continued prayers.
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much Sam. Blessings :)
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Dear Heidi, I really enjoyed your beautifully crafted allegory that was so rich with imagery and wisdom. I believe your poetic storytelling is both captivating and thought-provoking. A beautiful and exceptional piece! - Blessings, Daniel
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Daniel. I appreciate your positive feedback. Blessings :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:06 AM
An enjoyable read Heidi, very inspirational. Tom
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thank you Tom. I am happy to hear that :)
May Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 7:03 AM
You are determined to soar as you examine your options, Very nicely penned
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
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