The Hawk


The hawk circled, watching below
at all the activity happening
He focused on each person, as he would prey
But, instead he was just observing, listening, learning
He went to the wise owl and reported his observations and instincts
As he flew across the landscape, he could see things far and close 
He could see the present and the past
A span of time that connected things like a familiar path
A path flown many times!
The wise owl said, you are right, your vision is clear
You will reach a destination where everything makes sense
Stop circling; Fly with freedom and you will discover your new path
The others below will never anticipate this!
For they were not here for so many years
They do not know who you have become
They will never reach you no matter what they do
For they lack the critical knowledge and they are the ones who are stuck!

Heidi Sands

6/10/24

Received Poem of the Day June 12,  2024.

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Date: 6/27/2024 2:51:00 AM
What a team the Hawk and Owl make! A beautiful poem full of great meaning….inspirational just like you Heidi! It makes me happy to see your name up here….you are so deserving of it!! Congratulations on POTD sweet Heidi! Debx
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Date: 6/27/2024 5:25:00 AM
Thank you for being so kind. Your comment brings s smile :) I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/16/2024 9:06:00 AM
Fly high dear Heidi! Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Date: 6/16/2024 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Linda. :)
Date: 6/15/2024 5:28:00 AM
I am so happy to see that you were honored with POTD for this soaring piece Heidi! I can't overstate the accolades below ! Lessons to be learned and I hope that it is not too late! Congratulations and Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 6/15/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike! Happy Saturday . Xoxo: :)
Date: 6/14/2024 8:15:00 AM
Belated congrats on POTD for this outstanding work, Heidi. Happy Friday, Gershon
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Date: 6/14/2024 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Gershon! Happy Friday :)
Date: 6/13/2024 2:03:00 AM
Back with belated congratulations to you Heidi on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 6/13/2024 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Have a great day :)
Date: 6/12/2024 9:06:00 PM
Congrats Heidi!! Your "Hawk" had something to say. Keen and observing, beware what he ssees.
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Date: 6/12/2024 9:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandy. Will do :)
Date: 6/12/2024 6:16:00 PM
Dear Heidi, your last line says it all. ' For they lack the critical knowledge and they are the ones who are stuck. ' Sad that many in the world can relate to this. Animals are very smart, indeed. Your thoughts are powerful. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/12/2024 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Brandy. Animals are smart. I appreciate your kind comment! I hope all is well. Hugs :)
Date: 6/12/2024 2:06:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you. love, Gina
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Gina. Blessings :)
Date: 6/12/2024 9:32:00 AM
O for the hawk eyes of a wise owl, we’d never miss a trick. A lovely Free Verse Heidi, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:54:00 PM
Exactly. Thank you Beryl :)
Date: 6/12/2024 8:16:00 AM
Congrats of poem is the day, dear. We have much to learn from the wise owl. :)
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:54:00 PM
Yes, we have much to learn from the wise owl! Thank you :)
Date: 6/12/2024 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "The Hawk" is a wonderful story/write. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs.... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.................
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:53:00 PM
Hi Paula. Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/12/2024 7:37:00 AM
What a way to see the flight of a hawk, Heidi. I love to watch them just sit and stare. Their stare so focuses, and I wonder on what. on a prey or just the passer Byers not afraid of anything. Congratulations on POTD, I enjoyed reading
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Date: 6/12/2024 7:53:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)
Date: 6/12/2024 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Heidi, for the honour. Excellent inspirational poem penned by a master storyteller. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 6/12/2024 7:53:00 AM
Thank you fir your kind comment :)
Date: 6/12/2024 6:18:00 AM
Great Poem!! Hawk and the way to go! Good values! inspirational!
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Date: 6/12/2024 7:52:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/12/2024 6:07:00 AM
Heidi, Dropping back with Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/12/2024 6:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 6/12/2024 5:30:00 AM
Hey Heidi good to see you're still at it. The hawk and the owl portray wisdom and foresight. Enjoy your time in the spotlight
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2024 6:11:00 AM
Thank you. I have been busy, but I will be back here more as usual when I can :)
Date: 6/12/2024 4:13:00 AM
Dear Heidi! I am back to say yes I loved your deep poem on the hawk's journey. Scoring POTD too! You're soaring high, keep inspiring us with your beautiful words! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2024 6:10:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/12/2024 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well written!
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Date: 6/12/2024 6:10:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/12/2024 3:22:00 AM
Heidi, a wonderful poem and message, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/12/2024 6:10:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/12/2024 2:14:00 AM
Be the hawk! Deep musings here, Heidi, enjoyed. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2024 6:09:00 AM
Thank you ! :)
Date: 6/12/2024 1:39:00 AM
You are a great storyteller! Enjoyed your work and congratulations on potd Heidi!
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Date: 6/12/2024 6:06:00 AM
Thank you very much ! :)
Date: 6/12/2024 12:42:00 AM
Wisdom flows through your words from the beginning until the end of this magnificient piece!. Many Congratulations on the POTD, Heidi. It's very well deserved. I enjoyed it so much. Well done. Have a wonderful awarded day!.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/10/2024 7:47:00 PM
This is AMAZING! What imagination and creativity you have! Like a tale from an enchanted forest. Hurrah, Heidi! ~ Spellbound
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2024 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon! I am happy to see your feedback. I hope all is well :)
Date: 6/10/2024 10:46:00 AM
What a wonderful mystical fable, Heidi. The metaphors are so clear and vibrant inviting us to experience the wisdom of your words. Thank you for this poem. Blessings and continued prayers.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam. Blessings :)
Date: 6/10/2024 10:20:00 AM
Dear Heidi, I really enjoyed your beautifully crafted allegory that was so rich with imagery and wisdom. I believe your poetic storytelling is both captivating and thought-provoking. A beautiful and exceptional piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Daniel. I appreciate your positive feedback. Blessings :)
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