The Hawk

The traffic is ridiculous.
It feels like cars and trucks are angry – flashing headlights, loud horns, slamming brake sounds.
Red and raw brake lights.
Starting and stopping.
Yelling and screaming as only lights and horns can.
I watch the traffic slide in and out of itself,
Like a snake, but in a choppy, non-graceful way.
No one is giving up their space.
I slow down and let an impatient truck jump in front of me.
Two cars slide in also.
Amazing as it looked like barely a space for one.
My brakes slam without any conscious thought from me.
I am watching the dance, glad that my feet are smarter than I am.
I start feeling irritated. There is tension in my neck now.
I am getting a headache at the top of my neck, in the back.
Something upward catches my eye.
A hawk, gracefully floating, soaring, enjoying her life, gliding.
God’s creation.
Reminding me that I am not alone.
God is watching the traffic also.
This changes my entire mood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Birds fly close to God...as they say; hawks are beautiful, indeed. Well done.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 10:33 AM
I love a good hawk, watching them not swoop down and eat the bunnies and squirrels who are rampant in my yard. They uplift me.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:18 PM
I used to bird watch while working as a bike courier, drive with a my ears, one eye on the road, the other on the sky... multi tasking ;) made eye contact once with a hawk traveling in the opposite lane.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:49 PM
I adore birds. Hitchcock's show terrified me against crows for awhile, but I have made peace with them. I pretty much like all animals. I know you have never forgotten this hawk, Maureen.
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October 26, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Reading this, I wonder how many other people there were so upset by the traffic that they missed even seeing the hawk? Great poem, and a reminder to look for and appreciate the special little "details" of each day!
Mcferran Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 5:32 PM
I know the feeling WELL! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:41 AM
I count on the little things, as the big ones irritate me so.
Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:20 AM
Amazing poem, Caren. Love it.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Thank you Line. I do have to admit this is true; it happened to me yesterday morning. A wake up call.
Rushing Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 11:15 PM
God gave you a bird's eye view. God's good.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Thank God for it, as I was really getting a bit of road rage.
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