The Haunted House

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THE HAUNTED HOUSE At the end of the lane it stood in shambles I decided to enter to see what's inside I walked through the door - it slammed behind me Scared me so bad, I thought I had died That's when I saw this apparition Coming toward me with a terrible grin I felt faint and thought I'd swoon As I watched the drool drip from his chin Then he laughed -- what a horrible sound My heart was racing at an alarming pace I wanted to run as fast as I could And get far away from this place That's when he spoke in a raspy voice He told me I needn't be afraid No harm would come to me If I would stay and become his maid He told me he had waited a very long time For someone like me to come his way He promised me great riches If I would agree to stay I thought to myself, what must I do To get out of the mess I was in And then a plan occurred to me So I just asked him when When do I start in my new job And take care of you and this place He answered and said immediately And a look of joy graced his face I felt a rush of sadness for him He seemed so grateful somehow I saw the furrows that marred his face Disappear from his wrinkled brow That was fifty years ago The ghost has long since gone There's a FOR SALE sign in the yard And I have moved to Rome 25 August 2018 For the contest, The Haunted House Sponsored by Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/16/2018 8:04:00 PM

I'm a little late,Curtis, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*

Curtis Moorman
Date: 9/16/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Late is okay. It's the thought of remembering and informing that carries the weight. You have always been in my corner and I appreciate your support.

Constance La France

Date: 9/5/2018 11:26:00 AM

Curtis, congratulations on your win in my contest, a creepy story with humor, I loved it, well done !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2018 6:29:00 PM

I really enjoyed your chilling tale written with such talented rhyme. Congratulations on your win Curtis! : )

Curtis Moorman
Date: 9/2/2018 4:11:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. It is nice to put one together and receive a 2nd place win with it. One day, I may even get a gold cup by one. lol

Charles Messina

Date: 9/1/2018 12:22:00 PM

Excellent write, Curtis. You sure know how to tell a good story. Congrats on your win in the contest my dear friend. Charlie

Curtis Moorman
Date: 9/1/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie! I could say that by being in my third marriage, I've had a lot of practice. But that would not be true. I suppose I just have a vivid imagination. Anyway, I appreciate the comment and the win.