The Haunted House

I drove around the countryside, one wet and stormy day;
as lightning flashed, I realised I'd truly lost my way -
I saw a house and went to ask directions from the folk;
I'll tell you what then happened, but you may think it's a joke...

The door was open, just a crack;
I knocked, then went inside;
the stench was terrible, just like
an animal had died.

Huge flies were buzzing all around
an ancient photograph;
as footsteps echoed through the house,
I thought I heard a laugh.

The front door slammed - the laugh again -
I shivered then with fright;
the door was stuck, I couldn't leave,
and guessed I'd have to fight.

'I - I mean no harm,' I stammered, then,
'I'm sorry to intrude -'
I wondered would my story hold 
verisimilitude.

The voice that boomed was deafening,
and curses filled the air;
my heart was thumping, hairs on end.
I felt an evil stare.

The stench was growing...footsteps neared...
a shadow on the wall!
I trembled like a frightened child,
and staggered from the hall.

I ran upstairs; from room to room,
I wandered, panting hard;
and cried, despairing at the sight:
the window frames were barred.

I spun around and saw a face -
such malice in its glare;
I knew I'd have to leave, somehow -
or else I'd die right there.

I sprang towards him, ready fists; 
he towered at the door;
I paused, then like a bull I charged...
and he was there no more!

I slipped and tumbled down the stairs, the door was open wide;
I hurled his photograph and, chased by flies, I rushed outside.

Sponsor-   Dear Heart

Contest-   The Haunted House

written 18th August 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:07 PM
I'm a little late, Jack, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
La France Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great storytelling poem, you had me hooked from word one, well done !
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 7:43 PM
You already know I faved this outstanding poem Jack. Congratulations on your win. It is a top winnerfor me! : )
Messina Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:40 PM
This is terrific, Jack! Great story you have narrated so well. Congrats on your win!
Callus Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 4:51 PM
You make an excellent narrator, Jack! You sure brought your haunted house to life! Best regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 2:21 PM
EXCELLENT Jack! I hope this is a top winner for you. This impressive piece is going into my faves my friend! : )
Valko Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Loved your take on the poem. Truly an eerie tale and nicely written!
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:28 PM
wow, you really went with it!! PUt your whole self into this one and I was thinking maybe you would have a twist like something funny at the end, but you made it a real horror show!! Very visual and so cool that at the end, that escape was made!
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Wow! Jack, your poem of rhythmic intrigue is enthralling and eerie. Your building suspense really captured me and your last two lines gave me a huge sigh of relief.. whew! A fantastic write my friend.. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:10 PM
eerily beautiful, jack.. am not going there!...huggs
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Watson Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Great rhythm and rhyme, Jack. I was there from lightning flash right to the frantic exit!
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