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The hills have come alive today, with the dancing of the leaves. The wind was playing songs of love, it really was unique! To see them waltz across the sky, then stop, and off they'd fly. They'd do a dip and take a bow, as the next pair flutters by. The birds were perched up in the trees, to see this autumn show. They'd cheer and sing their melodies with the wind as it would blow. The oaks and elms and maple trees, have all joined in the show. They'd dressed their leaves so festively, they drop them and they'd blow. This is a magical season in time, the Harvest dance comes but once a year. Once the trees lose their leaves, then winter will soon appear. 11-9-19 Brian Strand Formal Poetry Contest 3/12/22 ~~1st~~

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Date: 3/24/2022 10:52:00 AM
Lovely poetry Debra, a beautifully described harvest dance… Belle
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/24/2022 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Belle, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/13/2022 3:04:00 AM
A great personification. Congratulations!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/13/2022 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 2/20/2022 1:02:00 PM
I'm impressed by your debut poem on Soup, Debra....lively, as the leaves dance you so well describe. Hope you're enjoying your stay here, my friend. Regards // paul
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Debra L Brown
Date: 2/20/2022 1:29:00 PM
Hi! Paul, I have poems on Family Friend Poems. This poem was rejected by them. I guess their loss is PS's gain as it was published in their book (P.S. Anthology II). I really like it here on Soup. I can talk to the poets themselves. I will eventually bring all my poems over to soup. Thanks Paul. I enjoyed talking to you. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 12/26/2021 1:47:00 PM
How cute that the leaves dip and take a bow as the next pair flutters by!!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 1/3/2022 4:34:00 PM
Hi Kim, Watching leaves are fun if you live in the hills. They do look like there dancing if the wind catchs them right. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 12/19/2021 7:04:00 PM
Autumn is perhaps the best season when each leaf on trees turns into a flower. You have caught the spirit of this harvest season very well !
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Debra L Brown
Date: 12/20/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Valsa, your to kind with your words. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 12/11/2021 7:28:00 AM
Your "The Harvest Dance" is a wonderful write and picture. Never thought of leaves dancing but guess they do. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Debra L Brown
Date: 12/11/2021 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. For your words of encouragment. When the leaves were falling to the ground, I used to think they looked like they were dancing. Blessing Debra
Date: 11/30/2021 10:44:00 AM
A fun read, and it reveals a fun write on your part. It comes alive --thanks
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Debra L Brown
Date: 11/30/2021 5:29:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, thank you for the encouragement. Blessings ~ Debbie
Date: 11/17/2021 9:44:00 AM
Just came here to read your first post Debra...capturing the essence of autumn in your own style...great imagery and flow...Hugs...~ Ani
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Debra L Brown
Date: 11/17/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank You! Anitha, For your encouragement... Many Blessings ~ Debbie
Date: 11/10/2021 2:58:00 AM
I enjoyed everything about your lovely poem and felt like I was dancing among the leaves too. Beautiful. Emilia : )
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Debra L Brown
Date: 11/10/2021 5:17:00 PM
Emilia, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debbie
Date: 11/5/2021 5:29:00 PM
Debra, I love this. The rhythm flowed with picture perfect imagery and your photo captured the 'dance'. I totally agree, autumn is the most magical time of year! Delightful poem! Blessings, Paulette
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Debra L Brown
Date: 11/5/2021 6:14:00 PM
Thank Paulette, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Blessings ~ Debbie
Date: 11/4/2021 3:34:00 PM
And then the snow queen will adorn each branch with a beautiful gown of crystal. Great stuff here Debbie. Beautiful rhyme, rhythm and description. God Bless, JB
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Debra L Brown
Date: 11/4/2021 3:46:00 PM
Hi Judy, Looks like you have added another verse to my poem. Thank you! for the encouragement. Blessings, to you my friend ~ Debbie
Date: 10/28/2021 2:06:00 PM
a charming poem of personification, Debra, this first post of yours at Soup!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/28/2021 5:13:00 PM
Thank You! Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed it, People here are very nice... Best Wishes ~ Debbie
Date: 10/26/2021 2:00:00 PM
what a delightful autumnal poem, I love this time of year:-) xx
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/26/2021 5:51:00 PM
Thank You, Jan, for your kind words- I love this time of the year as well, there seems to be a calmest in the air.
Date: 10/17/2021 6:31:00 PM
Wow! W Virginia sounds gorgeous Debra...good write!
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/18/2021 6:01:00 PM
Thank you! James.. For your words of encouragement. Fall is my favorite season. WV hills are a site to behold. Best wishes - Debbie
Date: 10/15/2021 3:24:00 PM
This is perfect. I felt like I was dancing my way through it :)
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/17/2021 4:49:00 PM
Thank You! Heidi! I glad you enjoyed the poem. I live in the hills of WV, watching the leaves fall here is quite mesmerizing. - Blessings, Debbie
Date: 10/15/2021 12:15:00 PM
You poem makes the 'Show' come alive for me. Lovely penned, Debra. Have a happy day, as you write away... Joy and Light, Gershon
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/15/2021 1:33:00 PM
Thanks, for the words of encouragement... Debbie
Date: 10/13/2021 9:15:00 PM
Very nice. I personally love autumn.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/14/2021 6:04:00 PM
Hi! Richard, Autumn is my favorite season, it's such a peaceful time of the year. "Your to kind with your words". Best Wishes, Debbie
Date: 10/12/2021 5:50:00 AM
Hi Debra, Welcome to the soup. Hi echo Gershon's comments. I especially liked your 4th stanza.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/13/2021 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Nancy! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Many Blessings
Date: 10/11/2021 7:18:00 PM
Love the title, the images, and the theme of this autumnal delight, Debra... And welcome to Poetry Soup! Write on, please. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Debra L Brown
Date: 10/11/2021 7:41:00 PM
Thanks you for your kind words. Many Blessings, Debbie

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