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The Guy from Quebec

Beneath his coal-black forelocks, flirty eyes kept meeting mine when I allowed my gaze to fall on him. As if I were a prize, he grinned at me. He'd put me in a daze! When he approached, my heart began to pound. He spoke so fluently, and his accent was French! I'd never heard a sweeter sound. He asked me on a date. Of course I went! We chatted in a cafe as we ate. Inside the core of me, a longing grew. then as he drove me home, I could not wait for what I knew would very soon ensue! Once parked, he turned to me, eyes deep and tender, and all that I could do was to surrender. Dedicated to my indelible memory: Guy Loranger, wherever he may be. Written Aug, 9, 2016 for Becca Teagan's All I could do was surrender - Shakespearean Sonnet

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Date: 4/17/2018 12:32:00 AM
So sweet. This guy made such an impact on you - this is the third poem I read about this sexy Quebecois. We need to find him!
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Date: 10/9/2016 8:01:00 AM
Poetry that's just too good to be true...
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Date: 8/18/2016 10:03:00 AM
So, what happened after that? ;-) Great write, Andrea. Congrats!
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Date: 8/17/2016 8:35:00 PM
Yep, seemed too passionate to be made up...great write!
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, beautiful flow, and very romantic. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:16:00 PM
Lovely Sonnet and lovely memory, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in this 'surrender' Premiere contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/17/2016 3:04:00 PM
I predicted a winner. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/17/2016 12:32:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/13/2016 6:07:00 AM
A lovely memory to cherish, Andrea. A wonderful write. Best wishes for the contest. #7. T.J
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Date: 8/13/2016 3:31:00 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea, sounds like just the chap every woman would like to meet, what a lovely memory and I just love sonnets, good luck in the contest and take care......Vera
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Date: 8/11/2016 4:27:00 PM
Hi Andrea, a wonderful sonnet. A story with such wonderful poetic content. This journey down your emotions page is always worth the taking. Your sonnet from memories pages, is written in your usual high quality. This has to be a seven and a fave. An excellent write Andrea. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs....Mike, XX
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Date: 8/11/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thought I'd stop by and read a couple more of yours while I was already here. Very nicely written, and a beautiful memory of young love.
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Date: 8/11/2016 5:51:00 AM
I think i am sucker for romance, thank you for sharing this it has allowed me to feed my craving . Really loved your poem Andrea. Smiles *Ron*
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Date: 8/11/2016 4:25:00 AM
Very tender and romantic:) Lovely write:)
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Date: 8/10/2016 11:59:00 PM
What a lovely memory, Andrea, and put to script so well, as fond things are. No need to wish good luck on such a fine piece, Viv x
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:55:00 PM
what a perfect poem for this topic and you worked those words into your poem flawlessly! bravo, andrea!
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:50:00 PM
I like this....a 7 and a winner i'm sure.
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Date: 8/10/2016 5:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You penned a good well written sonnet. I see why you couldn't resist. I think I'm about to surrender too.I wish you the very best in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/10/2016 4:31:00 PM
I don't blame you one bit. Even I might have surrendered ...lol
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Date: 8/10/2016 4:24:00 PM
Really wonderful writing...gotta love "The Quebecois Men"! A story piece, my fave... terrific job, a delight to read "your memory". my best to you in the contest :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/10/2016 4:09:00 PM
WOW I bet you couldn't resist.... he sounds absolutely amazing :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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