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Early in the morning as the quiet of night is fading, I hear the kakakaka akakak of the gulls calling; and outside my window they glide in a swooping dance, as night turns into a blue sky, they twirl and swirl and glide. Drifting on the breeze with wings outspread, above tall majestic maples they just hover; then, suddenly they are gone from view. Gone the beauty to farmers crops that ripple in the sun- to parks and water they rest and feed 'till day fades to sunset. ___________________________ July 28, 2015 Poetry/Verse/The Gulls Copyright Protected, ID 15-1072-098-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, No. 125 Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 10/24/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thanks Tania, Connie, and Line for your comments and congratulations ~
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Date: 10/21/2018 8:46:00 PM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/20/2018 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement with this lovely winning poem Constance!
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Date: 10/20/2018 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem, I could hear the gulls, nice imagery!
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Date: 10/19/2018 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Victor, Paul, and Gershon for reading my poem and leaving those great comments, so appreciate, I watch the gulls every morning, their calling wakes me up ~
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Date: 10/18/2018 3:58:00 PM
The sight and sounds of these enticing creatures eloquently penned, Dear Heart. ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/18/2018 3:27:00 PM
You aptly describe these seagulls while appealing to our senses, Constance. Reminds me of when last July I stayed at Ostend and each morning I was awakened by the 'kakakaka akakak of the gulls calling'! ~ Regards // paul
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