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The Green Man

acorns and leaves make up his mind too as foliage entwines ours like bridges, like walkways, camouflaged in an every-day of solitude; these berries may not last; his thought runs deeper - deities of the core, the spirits would say - to old log fires by weathered stone, you, his old flame, share but only when you think we're thirsty, that is

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Date: 11/10/2023 8:47:00 AM
Your way with weaving words is so creative and artistic. With an evocative touch flowing throughout your lines. I absolutely love the lines “ walkways, camouflaged in an every-day of solitude;” soul stirring! So well articulated and delivered! Pleasure reading this
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/10/2023 10:59:00 AM
Your thoughts are very welcome and appreciated, thank you
Date: 11/10/2023 4:45:00 AM
I love the word play in your poem, Clive, along with the subtle imagery. I especially liked "camouflaged in an every-day solitude." It created such a visual and added a tone to your poem. Have a splendid day, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/10/2023 5:13:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate oyur thoughts on my poem

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