The Great Indian Bustard

Hybronnet Poem, 14 lines, 10 syllables per line. 
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Brown, white, grey, black crown, across breast black band
Colors saturated with calm grassland
Too Heavy for a bird, too tall a bird
Too less vision, too shy to fly a third
A Haughty look, loves clear view, regal stance
Just 140 left in the world, at glance
The Great Indian Bustard now rare bird
Changing landscapes pushing it to a word
Rewilding is a lie, damage control,
Programs, Funds, afforestation, all swell
Management, Planning are scrabble words play
Critically endangered bird display
A barren land, for want of just land clear
Piece of undisturbed grassland, now so dear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 7:19 AM
thriveni, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, lovely poem, Constance
mysore Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:36 PM
Kind friend, Thank you for your precious time and effort in holding these contests. I am so grateful to you for I am learning to write in new forms because of you. I am so very happy to know you like it. Thank you for this happiness dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
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September 17, 2024 at 4:12 PM
A very interesting Hybronnet on The great Indian Bustard, looked them up, what beautiful birds they are, it’s so sad they’re becoming rare. Congratulations on your win in Constant’s contest thriveni… Beryl
mysore Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:18 PM
I am grateful for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you for your interest and time in looking at those beauties. did you observe their stare? Because of their lesser vision they don't blink often so the look is captivating. Thanks again poet, Blessings & cheers.
George Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 7:17 PM
Unfortunately many birds are becoming extinct. When I was young, I could see hundreds of sparrows on rooftops and by the side of drainages. Now hardly I see any. I wonder if Indian bustard belongs to the peacock family. Sad they are an endangered species. A beautifully written hybronnet. Congratulations dear Thriveni.
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:52 PM
we do have a few sparrows here. when they chirp sweet I feel like suffocating them by hugging! ah, thank you for your kind visit dear poet friend. your words means so much to me. thank you. Cheers.
Gasun Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 4:07 PM
Wow! Wonderfully written Hybronnet my dear poet friend. I'm not familiar with the form but I can see you did an excellent job on it. Great imagery, rhyme flow and everything. Thanks for sharing this gem and also this bird. I'm an animal lover and I'll look this up later. Congratulations on this superb Hyronnet and your shining win!You're a very talented poet. God bless you always and your writings.
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:49 PM
Thank you my dear poet for your kind visit. This poetic form is new to me too. I am glad you liked it. The bird is a beauty, blends in with beautiful mud brown. Its stare is to die for, so arresting. you'l love it I am sure. thank you for your kind words, I am grateful for your blessings. thank you.
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September 16, 2024 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I had to look up the bird to see what it looks like. I have never heard of one and when I looked it up, I knew why. It is a bird on a different continent. Thanks for sharing this information with us. Sara K
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:45 PM
thank you dear poet for your kind visit and interest in the near extinct bird. your kind & happy words means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I do not know this bird. Thanks for writing about them... Have a blessed day with your win..................
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:43 PM
cheerful poet friend, thank you for your kind visit. I am glad you liked it. thank you for the blessings. Cheers.
May Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 1:55 PM
It's unfortunate that these birds are on the brink of extinction, it's all too common to see animals vanish
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Yes it is a serious issue, but we are preoccupied with wars. no time to save mute ones. Repugnant sadness. your visit is precious to me dear poet, thank you for your words. Blessings & cheers.
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September 16, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Your vividly descriptive poem is expressive and informative. CONGRATS on your placement, Thriveni. Janice
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:37 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet.I am glad you liked it. your happy words means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Read Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:52 AM
So sad to witness the demise of such a lovely creature. Your poem says it all brother Thriveni.
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:34 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. sadder it is to be mute spectators. I appreciate your words, thank you. Blessings.
Jones Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Back to say yaaaaay your poem had placement! Congratulations poetess!
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 6:45 AM
thank you for the cheers dear poet friend. your visit is special so is your kind words. thank you
Jones Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 1:37 PM
I bow to you for your accomplishment in writing in this challenging form! Thriveni I was educated, engaged and enlightened about a subject an animal I’ve never heard of before. In fact I’m going to google it so I can see a photo! Great job!
mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Ah you! dear poet friend, your words fill me with pride. I am glad you liked it. challenging it is to rhyme for me. I am grateful for your kind visit and happy words dear friend, Blessings & cheers.
Crandall Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Aw that's too bad, Thriveni. Thanks for introducing them to me. I just watched a video showing them. They're a cool looking bird.
mysore Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. I am so glad you took time to look up. Sad they are at the brink of extinction. thank you, blessings & cheers.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 6:32 AM
You've drawn attention to something important, I am made aware now, thanks
mysore Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I am grateful for this pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. thank you so much. Blessings & cheers.
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