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December.13.2023

The Grandeur of Fall Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Emile Pinet

We have said bye to summer's horrid heat. The dim sunrays that fall are no more wild. Bodies will not be drenched in pouring sweat. The soft zephyr blowing is cool and mild. Autumn is the season we all adore. It comes in deep auburn and golden glow. Our earth looks gorgeous in colors galore. Like a regal queen, she puts up a show. Early mornings are of lavender grey. Sprawling wheat fields are full of ripened corn. Each one of us feels so joyous and gay. This pleasantly cool season, none can scorn. As autumn like a peacock struts its hues Poets waltz in company of their muse

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/13/2023 9:25:00 PM

This is such a magnificent sonnet dear Valsa, I absolutely adore your elegant wordsmithery here! Gosh, so many vivid whimsical scenes of autumnal bliss you've hued here with your artistic brush-quill and how creatively you've personified the earth as a regal queen, putting up a colourful show in the grandeur of autumn! Ahh, my heart is beaming with the aurous aura of your poesy, with so many magical lines to adore and admire! You're such a beautiful souls who hues golden imageries with talent

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/13/2023 9:27:00 PM

"Early mornings are of lavender grey. Sprawling wheat fields are full of ripened corn", "As autumn like a peacock struts its hues Poets waltz in company of their muse" A very eloquent take for the contest my dear, best of luck to you, sending love & light always :) a fav

Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2023 10:43:00 AM

Excellent poem with many memorable lines.

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/13/2023 9:19:00 AM

"As autumn like a peacock struts its hues Poets waltz in company of their muse" -- Perfect! All good, but that line I think will live on forever. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2023 3:52:00 AM

Poets waltz in company of their muse. I like that line. Fall does give us ideas for works of beauty. I like this one and enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2023 12:10:00 AM

I do love the autumn but it's now past here, cold winds and rain are the norm now. Best of luck in the contest Valsa. Tom

Karen Jones

Date: 12/13/2023 12:01:00 AM

This one is flows like a whimsical autumn breeze. I love the line Early morn are of lavender grey! Just beautiful! Great job. Good luck in contest.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/13/2023 12:04:00 AM

The photo is great too! I have yet to bother learning how to use the add photo feature.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 11:57:00 PM

What a most beautiful autumnal sonnet this is dear valsa, you do rhymes so flawlessly that it is almost unnoticeable that this is a sonnet, because of the eloquent flow of your lines and words and the way you’ve painted imagery in such a descriptive manner left me in awe mesmerized and captivated, i see autumn in such a royal manner through your words. I especially love “ Like a regal queen, she puts up a show. Early mornings are of lavender grey. Sprawling wheat fields are full of ripened-

Ink Empress
Date: 12/12/2023 11:58:00 PM

Just wow! So detailed and so stunning! I just love this. I wrote a sonnet on this prompt and discarded it because i felt like mine was not good enough. Im not very good with sonnets. But you’ve nailed it. Best wishes for the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/12/2023 9:55:00 PM

You make the autumn appealing. A lovely piece.