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The Gospel of Truth-W

Sleep and unicorn Both are rumored to exist I won't see any. =================== Eighth place win Contest : Unicorn Haiku by p.d.

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:04:00 AM

AMAZING

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2010 9:39:00 AM

My congratulations to you on your win Dr.Ram in (Destroyer((Poet's) contest "Unicorn Haiku". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2010 7:41:00 AM

this sure made me smile, Dr. Ram ^_^ I can relate to this!! -- Congrats on your win -- nikko :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/1/2010 9:56:00 PM

How sad about the sleep. congratulations on the win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2010 6:55:00 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in P.D.'s Unicorn contest with this original and creative entry... enjoy another special victory my friend.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2010 5:37:00 PM

I LOVE THIS One, dr. Ram. ONe of MY number ones in this contest. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2010 4:54:00 PM

Dr.Ram, CONGRTULATIONS!! and thanks for your contest entry trully enjoyed,...p.d.

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 7/28/2010 6:32:00 PM

So real, we live in a world where the unicorn is a symbol of mythical charm, and sleep is what so many of us wish was tainted with star dust for a restful night. You have taken and created a wonderful haiku that exudes volumes of truth laced with desire.

Constance La France

Date: 7/26/2010 8:36:00 PM

This one is very cute, Dr ~ best of luck in the contest ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2010 7:41:00 PM

hahaha, Very witty, Dr.Ram!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/26/2010 5:05:00 PM

Oh Dr. Ram.. be an optimist.. u might see one running around some day..haha.. and if u do ..run...haha.. this is very good and good luck in the contest my friend... I have a new one too.. with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2010 4:26:00 PM

Good one..Good luck in the contest..Sara