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The Golden Girl

The Golden Girl as named by Vienna (thanks girl) Appointments here appointments there Rushing round yet getting nowhere. I would love the time to stop and stare At the golden daffodils waving in the air Strong and tall, basking in the sun Nothing to worry about, having daffodil fun. I am going to take the time to see, The beauty that’s surrounding me. The golden trumpets of daffs in the sun I am going to learn the names of some. My little car was a Burnt Gold Daf My first car Limerick raised a laugh To Vienna that named me the Golden Girl I am going to stand and let my trumpet twirl I thank you for the name suggested, I thought about it and inwardly digested. The Golden Girl I am going to be From now on that Golden Girl is me. Follow the sun and enjoy life while I can Stop and stare at every gorgeous man Look but don’t touch while I can. The golden sun sets every day None know how much time we have to play. So take the time to stand and stare At gorgeous things everywhere Every day try to fulfil a dream You never know when you may roll in the stream
This is inspired from my limerick " My First Car" if you did not read it you will not understand the last line here.

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Date: 3/25/2012 1:47:00 PM
Her essence shines from deep within. This Golden Girl that makes me grin. With a heart of tender petals. From daffodils she wears like medals. The moon and stars now know her name. The night shines bright from her golden flame.
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:34:00 AM
well done mate ...at any rate .. the words of symetry...
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:56:00 AM
Hi Mandy, so you are the golden girl, well can't argue with that, you've brought many a golden smile to me when reading your poems, and this is no exception, love the first line last stanza, shades of my favourite poet, w.d. davies here. harry
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Date: 3/7/2012 12:51:00 AM
sparkling in the sun of poetry land, mandy.. i like and read your limerick with comments..:) greeat job!...huggs!
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:36:00 AM
It glows.....Mandy....lovely name and lovely poem. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Ann-Lise ooxxoo
Date: 3/6/2012 2:14:00 AM
Betty White is one of the original Golden Girls from the sitcom Mandy :0 xxx
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:08:00 AM
Oh yes I remember that didn't remember the name though ta xx
Date: 3/5/2012 11:23:00 PM
It's great to be inspired by a name such as that one. When I had my convertible Eclipse, I had andie55 on the license plate. I felt on top of the world, and when I had to trade her in for a newer and plainer car, I let that special name on my license plate die with the car. I am not feeling like andie55 anymore. Names really can encourage us so enjoy your golden name, sweetie!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:09:00 AM
Will do sweetie xx
Date: 3/5/2012 9:53:00 PM
i was in savannah walking without a car when i discovered the beauty of the world. or Gods world. i did not notice th dafodils untill i came home. but all the other flowers i learned they did roam. flowers i had not seen. with a car i would not dream. but given to me a curse became a theme. and i saw the beauty of Gods dream.
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent piece of poetry today Mandy. I hope this new week ahead proves fruitful to you within your life and in your poetry also. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Carol, I am sure it will do and thanks for reading xx
Date: 3/5/2012 2:06:00 AM
Aww Mandy you look nothing like Betty White lol..Nice write i love the None know how much time we have to play line, its so true..we should all stop and enjoy the simple things on life.. Hugs xxx P.s I always like to think of daffs as little cups and saucers :)
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:45:00 AM
Hi and thanks for the comment, got to ask "Who's Betty White?" Just enjoying a cup of tea and going through some mail xx
Date: 3/4/2012 11:33:00 PM
I love the write and the nickname. I know you will wear it well. Do as your poems says, enjoy the beauty all around you. The more we live, the more we have to write about! Thanks for sharing and for always giving encouragement. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:47:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda have to try and be a golden girl from now in, in my area Golden means "very good," so I may have to change to fit the name ha ha xx
Date: 3/4/2012 10:37:00 AM
Your poetry like you sparkles so well , gives smiles and pleasure , and we need smiles more , Hugs and best wishes luv Declan xxx
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Dec xx
Date: 3/4/2012 10:04:00 AM
"Golden girl"? Vienna gave you an appropriate name that sounds better than "Dandy Mandy". This is another fine write with entertaining words and rhyme.
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Robert xx

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