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                            ______

               the surface of night -
an elegance set in place 
         and defined 
   as a   celestial canvas
     
         - awe inspiring                  
                and dreamy,
      capturing the essence 
                                thereof - 
        
                and while
 the shared    space    of day 
  creates the perfect masterpiece
-  a poetic, yet angelic melody -
                    
             
        you continue to feel,
             
                    my
      
            glow    within
                       
   ____________________


~ your light, i could never be anything less ~ 

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             the surface of night -
an elegance set in place 
         and defined 
   as a   celestial canvas
     
         - awe inspiring                  
                   and dreamy,
      capturing the essence 
                                 thereof - 
        
                and while
 the shared    space    of day 
  creates the perfect masterpiece
-  a poetic, yet angelic melody -
                    
             
       you continue to feel,
             
                    my
      
            glow    within
                       
           ____________________


~ your light, i could never be anything less ~

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Karen Jones April 22, 2026 at 6:11 PM So emotive and romantic! Nice to read and reminisce.

Frank Sheehan April 13, 2026 at 4:53 PM Wonderful love poem. It's a classic and resonates deep within. Powerful pen. Magical imagery. Thanks for sharing. Brandy Nicole April 14, 2026 at 6:58 PM Dearest Frank, when love echos along the wind, moments become a beautiful melody. I appreciate you and your kind words. : ) Brandy

Valsa George March 15, 2026 at 6:07 AM Dear Brandy, the night looks so magical and enchanting .Your powerful imagination is soaring on wings. You have created a poetic melody here with your choicest words. Much enjoyed the beauty and serenity your lines have created and l feel my spirit also flying to that light. Brandy Nicole March 19, 2026 at 5:56 PM Dearest Valsa, you leave me in complete awe with this beautiful, yet soft and poetic comment. ( I feel as though I'm a star embracing the night sky ) while lingering in your thoughts. These sentiments within actually hold my recent poem ' our moments ' close, as they belong side by side. My heart feels a deep connection of a forever love- so deeply along the wind. In daylight and in moonlight. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick February 24, 2026 at 5:02 AM I missed this one somehow so today I got to enjoy reading it with its passionate lines. Thank you, Brandy, for sharing it with us. Sara K Brandy Nicole February 25, 2026 at 6:05 PM You have such a wonderful heart, Sara. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. You're very welcome. My best to you, always. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Bill Baker February 9, 2026 at 4:15 PM Your poetry is as lovely as the heartfelt love you share with us, Brandy. Smiles ~ Blessings Your poet friend in Texas, Bill Brandy Nicole February 11, 2026 at 8:49 AM Love is the heartbeat of my words, as my lips whisper the emotions within. : ) Thank you Bill, for this wonderful comment and compliment. My best to you. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy

Paul Callus February 7, 2026 at 2:20 AM It's a pleasure to be back reading your poetry, dear Brandy. Life has been hectic and more! ~ This metaphorical poem evokes both visual, and artistic interpretation, and the imagery creates a scene of stillness and magical tranquility. I can definitely feel the "glow within", and I love the final line! ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul Brandy Nicole February 8, 2026 at 7:17 PM Dearest Paul, it's always a joy to see your name here upon my page, along with your kind words. No need to apologize, my dear friend. I completely understand. Life is important. Within are whispers from the depth of my heart. Inspired by true moments in my world. It's magical, beautiful and tender, all at the same time. So sweet of you to say you can feel the 'glow within.' And, you love that final line. I'm smiling. : ) Thank you for your lovely comment. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy

Alexander Gwyn February 6, 2026 at 10:46 AM ~ your light, i could never be anything less I just love this line! Brandy Nicole February 6, 2026 at 4:42 PM Thank you, Bruce. This line reflects my personality. : ) You and your thoughts are appreciated. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy

Christuraj Alex February 3, 2026 at 6:58 PM Very lively, powerful images. Brandy Nicole February 5, 2026 at 2:58 PM Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you, Christuraj. : )

Robert Sidwell February 3, 2026 at 10:57 AM Lovely and wonderful! Brandy Nicole February 3, 2026 at 7:19 PM Thank you, Robert. : ) Your kind words are appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2026 at 12:26 AM Lovely as always, Brandy. I really liked that note at the bottom too Brandy Nicole February 3, 2026 at 7:17 PM Thank you, Andrea. So kind of you to say about the note. It started at the top, however, the end is where it truly belongs. : )

Mike Gentile February 2, 2026 at 8:28 AM Brandy, the way that you can so gently and sweetly caress words to convey your thoughts is truly impressive and so unique! One can always recognize the author! Romantic softness at its best! Happy Monday xxoo Brandy Nicole February 2, 2026 at 6:27 PM You make me smile saying, ' one can always recognize the author. ' The fact that my style and format is a bit unique, may have something to do with that. : ) A little shy about placing my voice here on my poem, but, it's a simple moment in time. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you, Mike. : ) Hugs, Brandy

James Peranteau January 23, 2026 at 3:53 AM ...and then Yahweh Created eve....precious poet; ty for tick'lin mine senses...much love Brandy Nicole January 23, 2026 at 6:00 PM Yes, He did. : ) Your thoughts bring a smile, James. Thank you for this lovely comment. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers January 20, 2026 at 12:06 PM Dear Brandy, You have a way of letting the imagery breathe, especially in that shift from night’s “celestial canvas” to the shared daylight. It’s delicate without being fragile. What I like most is how the poem keeps circling back to presence — not loud, not dramatic, just that steady inner light you’re naming. Winter Blessings, Dear Brandy, Daniel Brandy Nicole January 21, 2026 at 6:18 PM Daniel, at night, there seems to be a softness that just whispers ever so gently; taking my breath away. In the most beautiful way. As day curls around me, tenderness and a sweet melody take my heart beyond the clouds. It's breathtaking, indeed. : ) Creating a ' glow within. ' Your thoughts bring a smile, my dear sweet friend. Winter blessings to you as well. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden January 19, 2026 at 7:48 PM Gorgeous write, my friend!! Nice to see you’re still here, (I just returned after four years), you were always a highlight! :o) <3 Brandy Nicole January 21, 2026 at 2:14 PM Welcome back, Gregory. : ) That's a long time to be away, but life and moments within, are more important; for sure. I appreciate you and your kind words, my dear friend. Smiling at you, yep, I'm still here; and posting between moments. Which is nice. : ) Thank you for saying I'm a ' highlight. ' It's such a cute thought. : ) Hugs and smiles, Brandy

John Gondolf January 19, 2026 at 5:02 AM The glow within you radiates my sweet friend, you are the light that warms many hearts. Keep your heart light shining bright. Hugs, John Brandy Nicole January 19, 2026 at 6:01 PM A ' light ' that ' warms ' the hearts of many. I appreciate you saying this, my sweet friend. Such a lovely compliment, about the ' glow within me radiates. ' I'm holding this thought close, because it means so much to me. Thank you, John. : ) Hugs, Brandy

CayCay Godwin January 18, 2026 at 9:01 AM You sure anybody is really taking in the night? I stared at the woman so long I began to wonder if my orientation had changed, Wow, what an evocative backside her gown/dress has. Is it just me? I can't be the only one seeing a celestial canvas. As Tom said, this is indeed a sensory experience. Brandy Nicole January 18, 2026 at 3:58 PM Dearest CayCay, just letting you know that, if you gaze at curves way too long; thoughts will linger. : ) I'm smiling and blushing at this moment. The light is ' me ' within these words, and my heart is overflowing with so much love. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Becca Teagan January 17, 2026 at 2:24 PM This is beautiful, Brandy. "a poetic, yet angelic melody" -- I love that. Brandy Nicole January 17, 2026 at 4:55 PM Thank you Becca, for sharing this little phrase, as it curls around my heart ever so gently. Through poetic whispers, love is embracing me like beautiful melody. Your thoughts are appreciated. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind January 16, 2026 at 11:49 PM Absolutely gorgeous. Breathtaking. Romantic. Thanks for sharing with us. Your poetry should be in plaque. :) Brandy Nicole January 17, 2026 at 4:21 PM Dearest Paige, you leave me in complete awe with this compliment. I'm just a simple woman that writes from the heart. Thank you doesn't seem enough, but, I thank you for always sharing your kind words here with me. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith January 15, 2026 at 8:54 AM "the glow within" a lovely read with a great picture. Love Both.... Have a lovely day writing away................. Brandy Nicole January 15, 2026 at 5:45 PM Thank you, Paula. The words found me and then the picture. While the picture reminds me of distance, capturing it's beauty, the words hold love; touching my heart so deeply. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. : ) Hugs, Brandy