The Glow

the glow of the bride-to-be vying her future posted on September 26, 2018

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James Inman

Date: 9/29/2018 2:41:00 PM

I like what Michelle wrote. This could be interpreted many ways. She could be envisioning a beautiful future ahead or already moving on to someone or something better (trading up or perhaps taking her new husband to the cleaners).

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/29/2018 6:03:00 PM

Yes James. I love it when the readers fill in the intended blanks. Line xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/27/2018 8:40:00 PM

Ah, this one is a pretty picture indeed, with promises to keep! Excellent. ~ gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 8:41:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/27/2018 6:53:00 PM

Love how this is just ambiguous enough to suggest there may be more to this story?

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2018 8:42:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit, Michelle.