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The Glory of Dawn

To the black beauty's whispers dawn listens Wiping out her fears with white rays - a bliss Adding hues to her sombre robe - glistens Light bids adieu to the dark with a soft kiss
Wiping out her fears with his white rays - a bliss As his name replaces hope and brightness Light bids adieu to the dark with a soft kiss His first light evoking fresh liveliness
As his name replaces hope and brightness Dawn soothes the gloomy beauty's mind His first light evoking fresh liveliness Colours of hope he leaves behind
Dawn soothes the gloomy beauty's mind Adding hues to her sombre robe - glistens Colours of hope he leaves behind To the black beauty's whispers dawn listens
Dated: 12/07/2020 Submitted for: Completely Your Choice (42) Any Form Any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/24/2021 4:57:00 PM
did this gem ever win? It looks like I have not seen ALL your poems because I had never commented to this one. That means a few pearls may remain in the ocean!
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Date: 12/26/2020 6:30:00 AM
Ahh!! Dawn and night's dark communicate. Enjoyed reading this one. Pantoums are no so easy to write but you did a great job with this one. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/26/2020 9:32:00 AM
Sara thank you so very much for your visit and lovely comment. Yes, I just liked this particular form and it is interesting and challenging. Love and hugs :)
Date: 12/8/2020 9:51:00 AM
Wow. This is so sublime. I love how you express yourself in a totally unique way. with such great metaphors. excellent poetry of the very best standard. well done. Pete.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Peter for the visit and comment. God bless. Have a great day.. :)
Date: 12/8/2020 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful pantoum. If this is for the contest you should insert your date. ~~
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/9/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Victor. No, this is not for contest. Have a blessed day :)

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