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Special thanks to two wonderful poetesses Lin Lane and Tania Kitchin for joining me with this collaboration. 1/24/25

 

My muse has been hiding out And with no peep, squeak or shout She must be sound asleep No words, just counting sheep Tired of the poetry drought Oh where, O where has my gypsy muse flown Seems she has left me to write on my own I must not be too rude She'll cop an attitude And then taunt me like an evil old crone Mine vanished after my last book I've rested and changed my outlook My brain ran out of juice And my 'vowels' were loose Twas quite a feat that my muse took Honestly, I think mine is rebelling But there is absolutely no telling What my missing muse might do I dare not call her a shrew Or she'll never return to my dwelling Upon my desk, I see she's left a note "I'm on a vacation," is what she wrote "Perhaps I should've phoned To say I won't be owned." Should I have mentioned her in a footnote? Perhaps she's in a gypsy caravan Seeking a lover, a Romani man Living a nomadic life If he takes her for his wife I'll need a new muse and a new game plan My muse is now knocking on my door Searching for my words left on the floor She is gathering my lines Blending them like a fine wine Hoping for a few new poems and more Well, recently my muse returned Her holiday was very well earned I'll write sensible words Not on pooping or turds Poop poetry, my muse has spurned My muse is back after weeks refusing And now she can't stop yakking and schmoozing Three muses have returned But we're a lil' concerned... What if we don't find their thoughts amusing?

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Date: 1/26/2025 7:50:00 AM
The return of the muse with loose vowels and the turds are spurned", Have you abdicated the throne Jan, lol,
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Date: 1/25/2025 8:20:00 PM
Jan, this is epic. Hard to believe your muse was every away. Excelsior, Gershon
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Date: 1/25/2025 8:07:00 PM
Y'all should collaborate on a book.
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Date: 1/25/2025 4:20:00 PM
Enjoyed very much…smooch! xx
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Date: 1/25/2025 11:02:00 AM
The girls are back with a bang, enjoyed reading your collaboration poem Jan, Lin and Tania. xx
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Date: 1/25/2025 10:29:00 AM
- Three muses ... you know they reproduce quickly with several births a year - Enjoyable reading, well done :) - hugs
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Date: 1/25/2025 9:03:00 AM
Great collaboration Jan, you work well together. I'm not long up, think I'm over the worst now. Tom
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Date: 1/24/2025 7:12:00 PM
I'm glad your muses have found their way back. Both humorous and enlightening. My kudos to them all.
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Date: 1/24/2025 5:56:00 PM
Many things are going on in life that might alter our desire for penmanship. Very bright and shining limerick. ,Interesting and enjoyable to read, Jan.
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Date: 1/24/2025 5:39:00 PM
Jan...funny rhymes. Hey we're all allowed to rest and/or take a vacation. Life has plenty of stresses that change our inclination to write. Hope you are well! Thanks for your recent comment. Some things strike us a needing some light shined on them...and so we pounce! Take care!
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Date: 1/24/2025 4:11:00 PM
"My muse is back after weeks refusing And now she can't stop yakking and schmoozing Three muses have returned But we're a lil' concerned... What if we don't find their thoughts amusing?" -- They are all amusing; in fact, quite brilliant and shinning. Great, entertaining read. Thank you.
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2025 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Joe its amazing how the verses flow so brilliantly all thanks to our wonderful editor Lin who wove the lines so brilliantly:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2025 3:30:00 PM
She is back with vengeance Jan….this poem rhymes and flows beautifully with a nice tinge of Jan humour!! Debx
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Date: 1/24/2025 4:27:00 PM
Indeed l did! Ha
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2025 4:10:00 PM
I am sure you guessed my lines Deb lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2025 2:07:00 PM
Your three thoughts are always amusing, love all the Limericks in this collaboration… Beryl
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2025 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Beryl the complexities of life have taken us away from writing on a regular basis but I am hoping to be more active on the site now:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 1/24/2025 1:29:00 PM
Thanks for writing these to welcome back our muses… and in our favorite form. No mistaking a couple that are definitely yours! Lol
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Date: 1/24/2025 1:33:00 PM
oooh I wonder if people can guess which are mine Lin lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/24/2025 1:19:00 PM
What a fun read/collaboration. Oh yes, the muse loves to play with us. Even taking a vacation from time to time. Guess we must put our muse in it's place. Just pick up your words from the floor then show who is the boss of the pen. Hahaha!!! Have a fun weekend writing away.............
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Date: 1/24/2025 1:29:00 PM
We are in the middle of the worst storm I have known on the island, one house has lost its roof, 30 roads were blocked by trees, 107mph winds on the mountain, 94mph where i live. it is beyond scary . hugs jan xx

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