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The Gift That I Give You

A thousand treasures I could give a million kisses wrapped in twine a dozen roses red as wine A hundred letters in a box a trillion notes of sweet adore a million little things, and more The gift that I could give you is a token of my love wrapped in soulful presence blessed from up above A zillion tiny whispers a hundred stars of glee a goblet, full of me

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/26/2021 12:59:00 AM

This is wonderful Mystic, words sweeter than wine… Belle

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/26/2021 3:47:00 AM

Thank you dear Belle, how nice it is to be able to relax with a cup of salutary drink, from the fountain of writers, looking forward to meeting you face to face, :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 6/25/2021 9:39:00 PM

Mystic This is such a lovely poem! You must put this on a card! It will be a hit!! Hard to beat this one, but shall try!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/26/2021 3:46:00 AM

Thank you Krish, my daughter does greeting cards for a living, I will share it with her. Thank you for reading, take care of yourself, :)

Ann Foster

Date: 6/25/2021 12:46:00 PM

Sweet... This was fun to read and re-read... Flowers to you for your day... Ann

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/25/2021 4:32:00 PM

Thank you Dear Ann :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/25/2021 6:53:00 AM

lovely images of romantic love...Delice

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/25/2021 9:47:00 AM

Thank you dear Deice, you have an amazing name. Its sounds French. Hope you give the contest a try, would love to see you join, :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2021 4:26:00 AM

Lovely words. Enchanting. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/25/2021 9:46:00 AM

Hi Gina, Hope you join the contest and have fun with it. by the way I do not have your email yet for the poetry reading, please leave it by my soup mail when you get a chance, if you are still interested Thanks

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2021 1:38:00 AM

Should be a very large goblet for you :) Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/25/2021 9:45:00 AM

Hi Victor, lol, I hope you join the contest, and surprise me with something beautiful inside that gift box. I know you can, :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/24/2021 9:12:00 PM

Good one! You made me smile full of joy. Each line nice especially a goblet full of me! Good topic for contest.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/25/2021 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Rama, let your creative juices flow, it can be anything inside that trinket box of yours. Hope you join the fun :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/24/2021 5:48:00 PM

Awe, so beautiful my friend... Hugs does wonders to a human even an animal. Medicine in a box. <3 Eve

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/24/2021 6:04:00 PM

Thank you dear Eve, hope you join the contest, :)