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The Gift of Life

There is no sacrifice in death, just the meaning of rest. There is no conspiracy of lies which go unfulfilled as one dies. Every atom spins and turns. Every star glows then burns. For every death, God brings new life. Do not focus on the strife. Accept, accept, we are mere parts in the wholeness of His heart. No more special are the we than the mighty sequoia tree. There is no sacrifice in death, just the necessity of rest. Just the Gift of a span of time, no more or less precious for being thine.

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Date: 7/10/2009 5:03:00 PM
Interesting Quatrain. Sara God said that he made Man in his image and only Man not anything else.
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Date: 7/9/2009 10:33:00 AM
You are given a space of time, a lifetime, to "have ego" to be without a body gives you the "opportunity" to be "one" .......all the disincarnate souls who "rose" will be together. There is no way to know if x soul achieved the same level of "rise" as y soul..the more balanced you have achieved during your life the closer you will be to the "mind/heart" of Higher Power. If you can't let go of your "own wants and needs" I supect....you will incarnate rapidly and get to try again.
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:51:00 AM
and yet the fear in death is being separated from the one you love most, how to find him then, in the eternal blackness of the universe? That would not be rest for me, but anxiety
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Date: 7/8/2009 3:32:00 AM
Deborah, I like this poem. In Genesis Chapter one... During the creation, God blessed His creations each step of the way. We are all in this together. Every atom ever created has it's purpose and functions automously, as God planned. Mankind was given the responsibility to have dominion...NOT DOMINANCE... And instructed to REPLINISH... How do you think we've done? Go here>> http://www.redbubble.com/people/daneann/writing/3355478-genesis-decoded This is part of what I think! Love, Dane
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Date: 7/7/2009 11:13:00 AM
Very beautiful. Take away the fear of death and replace it with a feeling of much needed rest from the chaos the soul has had to endure up until the body sets it free. Add to this the idea of reincarnation, my future self can be a woman just as easily as a man (I'm a guy right now yes;)). Take care, oh lightened and loving one. -Yoni
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful balance in lines and good ryme, Deborah. All of God's creation is beautiful, even my cat Tiger, he is almost like a person to me. I have so much fun with him. I thank God daily for all my blessings, lovingly jm
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:48:00 PM
The gift is life. We all have "the Gift of a span of time". Why do we waste our precious gift with worries? Life is too short; If you lose your shorts, keep walking. We don't know when or how we'll go. Going to my favs.
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Date: 7/6/2009 3:33:00 AM
Love the way your words flow enjoyed reading your poem. Priz
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Date: 7/4/2009 10:20:00 AM
Very nice introspective write. Truly, a pleasant way to view the subject. Thank you... ~<><
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Date: 7/4/2009 9:41:00 AM
Words we should remember...so often we think the world spins around us, when in the scheme of things... we are simply no more special than the tree...Excellent poem!
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Date: 7/4/2009 9:36:00 AM
Deborah,...wonderful poem,..and it comes at a time in my life which calmed my grief,..ty for this well written and much needed poem ! james
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Date: 7/4/2009 8:05:00 AM
Very wise and lovely introspection. Well written and thought provoking. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/4/2009 6:38:00 AM
Deborah, this is a very thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love,Carol
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