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The skies are cold and grey today With winds in constant wayward sway. A melancholy November Ushers soon a cold December. A time to contemplate and write A poet's view filled with insight Into a world where dreams come true, Where hopes are high and sorrows few There dwells that optimistic hope, A faith instilled to help us cope, For in today's reality If not for faith, insanity Grows like a weed in garden's keep, Spreads choking and devours our sleep. What can a lowly poet do To grace us with a rainbow's hue? I meditate and bless the Earth In gratitude of our Lord's birth And with each serene breath I take I know of love that won't forsake. 1-4-18 Poem of the Day November 30, 2017 Thank you Poetry Soup Team! Any Couplet Written in October-November 2017 - Poetry Contest - 10th Placement Sponsor Laura Loo

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Date: 1/6/2018 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful couplet. Congrats on your win, Connie.
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:34:00 AM
Nice piece. You did well , keep it up Connie.
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Date: 12/31/2017 12:17:00 PM
enjoyed your poem and want to wish you a very Happy New Year Connie. Best wishes for 2018. love phyl
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/31/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thank you very much Phyllis. I must say I am happy to see this year end. Too many Doctor and dental visits. I wish you a happy and healthy New Year my friend. Blessings, Conniexxoo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:21:00 PM
Lovely couplet. Enjoyed...... Hugs
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Date: 12/22/2017 1:05:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful. Congrats on your placement Connie...Maria xxx
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Date: 12/18/2017 8:19:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 12/16/2017 7:32:00 PM
Connie, there are so many new contests. Get busy. hahaha. (like EITHER of us has time!!!)
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Date: 12/15/2017 9:49:00 PM
Hi Connie, I don't how I missed such a positive and uplifting write. Meditating on the Lord's birth can lift ones spirit. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/16/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis! Happy Holidays! : )
Date: 12/15/2017 11:07:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem, Connie. I like it very much.
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Date: 12/16/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Ghita. Welcome to Poetry Soup! : )
Date: 12/11/2017 6:02:00 AM
Excellent. very uplifting write. Enjoyed reading it. Congrats.
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Date: 12/10/2017 10:26:00 PM
Lovely and uplifting. You have painted a pretty rainbow's hue for me this morning, dear. Congrats on POTD, and thanks for your visit to my Constanza. Hugs
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Date: 12/10/2017 8:14:00 PM
I see it also got win with Laura Loo. So happy this poem is popular for you. Have a good week. I know you are gonna be even busier than ME!!
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Date: 12/10/2017 7:33:00 PM
..."if not for faith, insanity" Amen. Excellent write, great flowing rhyme :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 6:58:00 AM
You nailed it Connie
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Date: 12/5/2017 12:09:00 PM
It's true a love that won't forsake, a wonderful write Connie, congrats on POTD enjoyed the read immensely!
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:50:00 PM
Brilliant Connie, love the whole poem, but 4 and 5 are outstanding...
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:22:00 AM
Connie...You wrapped the Gift in poetic love and graced us! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2017 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations Connie...
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Date: 12/2/2017 11:34:00 AM
Lovely, uplifting poem Connie! Congrats on your POTD, sorry I missed it.
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:59:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Connie, back to congratulate you on a well deserved win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/1/2017 9:16:00 PM
Oh, dear Connie, you SO deserved this win. I love this one. BIG congrats on POTD!!! What a lovely message this poem has. You DO bless this earth with your love and poetry.
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Date: 12/1/2017 11:44:00 PM
That is such a lovely thing to say Andrea. So do you. Thank you sweetie. Hugs, Connie
Date: 12/1/2017 5:21:00 PM
Beautiful penned Connie...when all seems bleak the rainbow appears...
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Date: 12/1/2017 11:44:00 PM
When I see a rainbow I do feel like it is a lucky omen. Thank you Joseph. : )
Date: 12/1/2017 5:15:00 PM
Connie, I REALLY like this. I admire your use of a themed contrast between (and accompanying picture of) cloudy gray skies and a rainbow (of light and truth) passing through it all - beautiful!!! Very nicely done, and congratulations on your win!! Blessings to you and yours. :) Bartholomew
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Date: 12/1/2017 2:38:00 PM
Connie, returning with congratulations on your win with your lovely and uplifting write. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/1/2017 3:38:00 PM
Oh yes, your life mirrors my own, an exhausted reflection..lol!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/1/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I am trying to decorate for the holidays, get my Christmas cards made out, and wrap gifts. Wish I had more energy these days. Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/1/2017 4:49:00 AM
ingratitude of our Lord's birth...could not have said it better myself. Loved this poem sweet Connie! thank you and congrats :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/1/2017 5:07:00 AM
Thank you luloo. I am pleased to be on your winners list! Happy Holidays! : )
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