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The Gift

You have a gift, a shining castle of words Somebody told me, and I was naked in the night How did you get this gift, this weave of tongue in flight I am jolted again, to the time I was thirteen Hanging from my father's death On a long, thin silence of fear. Memory is a rising sun in a bitter sea, Hear me now, the heartbeat of my drum Since the stag had bolt me through the woods I fathom no reason, except love of solitude I head the lead wires in my hand It was our favorite past time and the season for roads They cut through rocks to make them everywhere Nothing got the votes like roads And only politicians drove cars then So after the dynamite had destroyed the familiar We were left with broken bits of wires Every child knew how to weave them Into something beautiful I was always making baskets, completed none So I would not have to worry what to put in them I wove with my fingers to incubate my words. So here I was amidst the bush cries of birds Covered in ripe naseberry aroma from the eyes of the stag Of course I heard the thunder, saw the black clouds too But I am not afraid of rain, there are trees to shelter me That was when the lightning fell Sizzled on my wire and danced right up my arm Gbonka, it was not you, I know I would have been burnt or dead It was Bwana Shango Telling me to sing, telling me to dance Instead, I ran But he was swifter than the stag Went home slept, woke up with a song in my heart A peeling joy for justice Bogle in my left ear, Garvey in the right A novel sense of freedom, a willingness to fight And that is how my gift came My pen is double axe and flame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/23/2010 7:01:00 AM
Hello David! thank you for your lovely comments! You too have The Gift! love Simone
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Date: 9/13/2010 10:53:00 AM
I'm glad you do have this gift that all can enjoy, David....An inspiring read for me today. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/12/2010 11:43:00 AM
Very inspiring David, wish I could write like that, I tend to stick to prose, but you have a wonderful gift there. By the way, many thanks for your tip about the title of my first attempt, took me some time to realise what you meant! Gordon.
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Date: 9/11/2010 3:30:00 PM
Yes, you have a gift. What a privilege to read and reflect on your words.
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:53:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us David. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:35:00 AM
Very moving story beautifully sketched in this lovely write. Rock like obstacles are a part of our life but great and blessed are those who can make stairs out of these rocks. You have great skill in your writing my best wishes are with you. I have placed a new poem Ground Zero today and shall be thankful if you can read it early. Love and best wishes ....Ravindra...David Smalling
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:56:00 PM
This was a very interesting piece..I enjoyed it..well done..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:18:00 PM
Boy, you have had it tough, David. Losing your father so young and having to fight your way through life must have been difficult as you wandered "amidst the bush cries of birds." And yet you manage to keep your optimism. Indeed your pen is a powerful weapon, and you use this instrument to convey your emotions so well!
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:12:00 PM
you sure have a wonderful gift, David. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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