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The Gift

Beyond day the carpet ride of night watch the stars, they own light that cannot, hide.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/6/2018 1:27:00 PM

Hello Pixie, I like the sky when it is pitch black. With a full moon shining bright and the shining stars. Have a nice day my friend.

Bobby May

Date: 12/5/2018 9:35:00 AM

Oh! Pixie Dust You have cleared the dust from my eyes, I can now see your poetry through your eyes!!

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 11/13/2018 3:59:00 AM

Your words are very minimal, but they create a truly vivid scene; very nice piece.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/12/2018 8:33:00 PM

A precious poem indeed, Pixie. Breath taking imagery...love this ~Charlie

Robertina B.

Date: 11/12/2018 8:10:00 PM

Such a breathtaking free verse, my friend.. A fave for me!! Penned beautifully!! Blessings..

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/12/2018 3:58:00 PM

Hi Pixie, the night sky, the moon, the stars, they are all a gift, as are your words. Beauty within its simplicity Pixie. A fave. have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/12/2018 3:34:00 PM

The evocative and emotive beauty of your poem is beyond heaven, Pixie, and your imagery sweeps me up and away in a breathtaking way. I love it and a fav! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Christy Edgley

Date: 11/12/2018 12:30:00 PM

Hello Thanks for commenting on my poem. I love this one you made. I love looking at the stars at night. You kind of inspire me a lil to write like this. This is awesome.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/12/2018 7:53:00 AM

I like it :)))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/12/2018 7:43:00 AM

Enjoy the gift, friend.

Lyric Man

Date: 11/12/2018 6:19:00 AM

Short, sweet.. and powerfully emotive!!