The Gift

The tree outside the window was bare,
its branches black thrust through the air,
like a nightmare in daylight lingers,
its branches resembled evil fingers.

The sky behind was stony gray,
it looked like it might rain that day,
I briefly wondered why I'd woke,
sat up in bed and lit a smoke.

So quiet is it  by the lake!
My ears felt hollow, began to ache,
a city girl, I'm used to sound,
the ambient noise of a busy town.

What if I'd turned the TV on,
would the vacuum inside the room be gone?
The cat, I noted, was fast asleep,
a lump beneath the quilts and sheet.

I glanced again at the blank TV,
then looked once more at the skeletal tree,
it seemed to sigh as if forlorn,
just waiting for Spring to be reborn.

For a moment, I just sat and stared,
the sky so gray, the tree so bare,
stark silhouette of black on gray,
the tomb-like silence where I lay.

These turned my mind to darker things,
my boring job, the fatigue it brings,
scattered off-days wasted sleeping,
life-force through my fingers seeping.

Sleep all day and work all night,
wonder if there's an end in sight,
keep a brave face so they won't see
how this schedule's killing me.

Just then I saw a flash of red,
though depressed, I raised my head,
A cardinal sat and cocked his head,
the black, the gray, the brilliant red.

I see the beauty in the starkness,
a flash of hope among the darkness,
this perfect scene a gift to me,
the genius, its simplicity.

And as I felt my depression lift,
God granted me another gift.
He knew just how to ease my woes,
before my eyes, it began to snow.

It's snowed so rarely in my life,
each memory's sharper than a knife,
the cardinal flutters in the tree,
and shakes me from my reverie.

The magic of  life is quiet and subtle,
the bud of a rose, a mirror-like puddle,
the magic is there if you let yourself see,
like the snow swirling 'round the bird in the tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Anderson Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Congratulations! Hope all is well with you!...Jimmy
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Congrats on the first place win
White Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 3:43 PM
I am so glad to see this one at the top Congrats Danielle
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 12:33 PM
This is really a beautiful poetic story that is both inspiring and entertaining. Well deserved first place win. Congratulations to you Danielle. Love, Connie
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April 10, 2010 at 12:02 PM
CONGRATS . GOOD JOB . ....# 1
Murphy Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 10:59 AM
very nice write and congrats on your win faleshia
Green Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:50 AM
This just flows so well, and yes... it's hypnotic. Great write.
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:31 AM
A perfect choice for no. 1. congratulations. Joyce
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:30 AM
lA perfect choice for no. 1. copngratulations. Joyce
M Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 8:02 AM
A perfect choice to wear the crown!!! The gift fulfilled evey goal of the contest and gave us such a great story, enjoyable to read in the wording selection -- flowing rhythm & rhyme. A perfect performance. I'll be looking for encores.
Dillard Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 7:36 AM
The verse is almost hypnotic and the awakening brought about through the messenger is well crafted. Very pleasing to read. Congratulations! RAY
Richards Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Oh Danielle....I can see why this beautiful poem was 1st place in Debbie's contest!! How wonderful is this??!!! Congratulations...and so well deserved!! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Congrats Danielle on your 1st place winning poem in Debbie's contest... a magnificent and heartwarming write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy ... see u at the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie
Guzzi Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 2:50 PM
What can one say but MAGNIFICENT! You gave me exactly what I was looking for and more, sometimes all the darkness that comes into our lifes gives us the "gift" of a backdrop to majesty...you are truely a gifted heart, writer, wife & friend I'm sure!! Light & Love Dreamaker
White Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Fantastical, Magical, probably the beginning of a remarkable book. of course I am saving this- Smiles
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 9:05 PM
Danielle - Two to the finals and both remarkable - Congratulations - God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 4:45 AM
Danielle, It is wonderful to see you have 2 poems here in the first round. Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:43 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Pringle Avatar
July 4, 2008 at 9:38 AM
Enjoyed your poem Danielle. Thanks.
Dhiman Avatar
June 30, 2008 at 9:20 PM
ITs juss too beautifully written...At some places, the rhymes were juss so amazing and unbelievable..
Seals Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 6:44 AM
Hello Danielle I really enjoyed reading your poem.continue to write. Congrats on your featured poem. B BLESS Crystal
Mckenzie Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 3:02 PM
Here Here Danielle wonderful reflective write about life Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Laura
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June 10, 2008 at 7:07 AM
What a great poem. Congratulations Danielle, on this wonderful write "The Gift" being featured. Vince
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