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The Ghost of Felina

Behind the thunder and the lightning hides a ghost, so fair but fright'ning; the Ghost of lovely Felina who was a dancer in Rose's cantina. She left her hometown of New Mexico to find her fate in El Paso, but the fierce hand of love's destiny left her dead in pain and agony. In El Paso, every night, her voice echoes, full of fright, from the ground to the skies above to call for her cowboy's love. In Rose's cantina, in depth of evening, if you hear a woman crying, it is Felina, left by her groom to roam; in his loving arms, she wants to go home. *Inspired by Robin's "El Paso"* October 17, 2022 12-16 Lines of Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest (4th place) Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Rhymes checked through: rhymezone.com

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Date: 10/31/2022 2:15:00 AM
Great Poem, Roger, congratulations
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/31/2022 2:53:00 AM
Thank you very much... It should have been more scary ....
Date: 10/30/2022 4:41:00 PM
Roger, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/31/2022 2:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for the appreciation and the placement...
Date: 10/17/2022 8:19:00 AM
Chilling. :) I like it!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/17/2022 1:45:00 PM
Thank you very much... It was challenging but fun making it...
Date: 10/16/2022 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Roger ~
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/16/2022 6:14:00 PM
Thank you very much...

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