The Ghost of Felina

Behind the thunder and the lightning
hides a ghost, so fair but fright'ning; 
the Ghost of lovely Felina 
who was a dancer in Rose's cantina.

She left her hometown of New Mexico 
to find her fate in El Paso, 
but the fierce hand of love's destiny 
left her dead in pain and agony. 

In El Paso, every night, 
her voice echoes, full of fright,
from the ground to the skies above 
to call for her cowboy's love.  

In Rose's cantina, in depth of evening,
if you hear a woman crying,
it is Felina, left by her groom to roam;
in his loving arms, she wants to go home.  

*Inspired by Robin's "El Paso"*

October 17, 2022 

12-16 Lines of Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest (4th place) 
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Rhymes checked through: rhymezone.com
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Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 2:15 AM
Great Poem, Roger, congratulations
Roger  Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 2:53 AM
Thank you very much... It should have been more scary ....
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:41 PM
Roger, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
Roger  Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 2:54 AM
Thank you very much for the appreciation and the placement...
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Chilling. :) I like it!
Roger  Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Thank you very much... It was challenging but fun making it...
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:06 PM
Beautiful poem, Roger ~
Roger  Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 6:14 PM
Thank you very much...
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