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The Genuine Legacy

A tree, bright and tall Hope deferred before the fall Slowly but surely the call is dead Look up! The sky bleeds red How can this be? Obliviously and ignored She closes her eyes and counts to four The dark revealed in a blink of an eye A shadow disappeared screaming, "she tried!" Uncertainty is present for those who wait Her question still lingers, "Is this my fate?" Their backs against the wall as they connive How can they stand against the divide? With one last breath she ponders For all these years, her heart wanders A tree, faded and tall Her voice was heard after all

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Date: 10/18/2024 2:11:00 AM
a powerful poem about hope and resilience. congrats on the well deserved win.
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Date: 10/17/2024 4:35:00 AM
inspirational. congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Date: 7/22/2024 5:30:00 AM
This is quite beautiful Anthony. I would Iove to hear how it was inspired and have you explain a bit about what you are saying here. Of course I can interpret for myself but it might not be what you intended. Your writing is wonderful though! Keep it up! Xoxo
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Date: 7/17/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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